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More Than Feelings
It's more than just feelings
that float between the two of us.
It's a shared tongue
sifting thru the darkness
soaking up the sun
gifting of an ear
when words are only words
but each other's company
is worth more than their weight in gold.
It's not just the way we long to embrace
or how I love the simple smile upon your face.
You know I think you beautiful
and you set my heart aglow
the beats go on forever
but not for the reasons you may know.
You're the shadow holding on to my hand
when I'm afraid to walk alone
my morning cup of coffee
so delicious, inviting, and warm
an umbrella when I need one
or just there to say hello
a breath of air when I can't breathe
placing your lips delicately upon my need.
I don't need one perfect
or one who only soothes the fear
I like one a little bit tough and dirty
who'll never disappoint
nor disappear
Published 1st Apr 2019
| Edited 14th Apr 2019
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1st Apr 2019 11:29am
Such a dear expression, Tim, and not ‘just’.☺️
A lovely springboard into the start of the NaPo.🌻
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A lovely springboard into the start of the NaPo.🌻
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1st Apr 2019 1:53pm
Now that right there...that is beautiful
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2nd Apr 2019 6:59am
That second stanza made me sigh, but that last one just hits it out of the field, Tim
2nd Apr 2019 9:44am
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2nd Apr 2019 7:00pm
what a gorgeous beginning to a grueling month...
.. cant wait to see where the muse moves you next
.. cant wait to see where the muse moves you next
2nd Apr 2019 8:16pm
Thanks Shadoe,.i am trying not to look ahead and to just speak what lies in my soul at the moment.
