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Damn Dolor
(One of 30 -- NaPo/GloPoWriMo 2019)
Damn Dolor
Finally towel'd out the wet from
my face and spiritual heart --
most often a suture to keep in
blood, grief...........healing
I've been trying to close out
all the yesterdays that
seemingly serve no purpose
other than reminders
of painful loss.
Damn haunting memories
keep getting in my way;
i realize people come and go
liken to a picture show.
They enter and i get to
love them in the beginning.
However, there's always
an ending.
Usually, for me
the ending is achingly
terminal and i am the
lucky one who gets
to stay...........
I don't believe in luck;
I must be damned.
_______________________
#NaPoWriMo2019
102 words
79 unique
Damn Dolor
Finally towel'd out the wet from
my face and spiritual heart --
most often a suture to keep in
blood, grief...........healing
I've been trying to close out
all the yesterdays that
seemingly serve no purpose
other than reminders
of painful loss.
Damn haunting memories
keep getting in my way;
i realize people come and go
liken to a picture show.
They enter and i get to
love them in the beginning.
However, there's always
an ending.
Usually, for me
the ending is achingly
terminal and i am the
lucky one who gets
to stay...........
I don't believe in luck;
I must be damned.
_______________________
#NaPoWriMo2019
102 words
79 unique
Published 1st Apr 2019
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1st Apr 2019 11:28am
Look at an end as a new beginning, we all have them, scale the mountains and then look at her beauty.
1st Apr 2019 3:19pm
Anonymous
1st Apr 2019 2:11pm
It's those who remain who always feel the agony of being left behind. I feel this deeply in regards to my father. Beautiful aching poem
1st Apr 2019 3:20pm
1st Apr 2019 5:35pm
2nd Apr 2019 00:26am
I imagine this is felt by many a one who has experienced loss and is still here
left to carry on.
I'm sorry it's relatable
thank You for sharing, though
left to carry on.
I'm sorry it's relatable
thank You for sharing, though
2nd Apr 2019 12:12pm
Those who stay are the strongest, Tallen. They face the circumstance alone.
Well done.
Well done.
2nd Apr 2019 2:00pm
I realize i MUST be strong
though most often i feel so weak
but perhaps what i perceive as
weakness is really sensitive
thank You for the encouraging comment
and kind praise
Honored for the RL add
though most often i feel so weak
but perhaps what i perceive as
weakness is really sensitive
thank You for the encouraging comment
and kind praise
Honored for the RL add
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2019 9:02pm
this gave me such an empathy headache
[i mean that as a compliment]
feels like you've spit the taste ov the word "lucky" from your tongue
as tho its unpalatable
such a powerful write, tallen
[i mean that as a compliment]
feels like you've spit the taste ov the word "lucky" from your tongue
as tho its unpalatable
such a powerful write, tallen
2nd Apr 2019 9:05pm
i believe in
Synchronicity
and
Yes, luck is a make believe gig out of the Gambling Hovels to draw in the marks.
appreciate the wonderful read and comments,
Shadoe
Synchronicity
and
Yes, luck is a make believe gig out of the Gambling Hovels to draw in the marks.
appreciate the wonderful read and comments,
Shadoe
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2019 00:44am
Treasure and focus on the good memories and events and try to let go the rest, it helps, and meditation is sometimes good for catharsis too. I feel you and your pen. Good read for my evening! <3
3rd Apr 2019 00:47am
I've been trying to do what You suggest
since 1976
it's a struggle and i cope with
baby steps on my Tao
thank You for reading and kind shares
since 1976
it's a struggle and i cope with
baby steps on my Tao
thank You for reading and kind shares
Anonymous
4th Apr 2019 00:19am
Hey. This is remarkable stuff. You honor the NaPo name by bringing this A Game.
"Damn haunting memories
keep getting in my way;
i realize people come and go
liken to a picture show.
They enter and i get to
love them in the beginning.
However, there's always
an ending."
Damned if that ain't poetry.
"Damn haunting memories
keep getting in my way;
i realize people come and go
liken to a picture show.
They enter and i get to
love them in the beginning.
However, there's always
an ending."
Damned if that ain't poetry.
4th Apr 2019 00:22am
It's You Veteran Poets rubbing off
I am no poet
but the more i read
well, i guess sooner or later something good had
to come of it.
Super appreciative of Your read and wonderful comments
thank You
I am no poet
but the more i read
well, i guess sooner or later something good had
to come of it.
Super appreciative of Your read and wonderful comments
thank You
