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I'm dead
under neon, unnatural, psychedelic light...I succumb
strangled by your guitar hero chords
I cry for release...choke on acidic guilt
honesty burns when it's swallowed back down
you cracked me open read me like a book
I became your own personal porno mag,
pinned to the wall
fantasy
raped
you know me
my weaknesses
you played me, set me up, and knocked me back
Ms. Robinson with a whiskey chaser
when the truth of my cunt sold me out
you bought me dirt cheap
lonely hooker...got me for a compliment
the lies in your smile should have been a warning
I knew better than to fuck the Cheshire cat
just when I needed reassurance
poof
you vanished
used
I committed
matrimonial suicide
I'm dead
Published 29th Mar 2019
| Edited 30th Mar 2019
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29th Mar 2019 10:11pm
Reality can really hit us hard when we fall too hard to fast just to be disappointed or used.
Anonymous
29th Mar 2019 10:19pm
😱😢😭
29th Mar 2019 10:21pm
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Anonymous
29th Mar 2019 11:41pm
damn Brenda :(
you're never alone <3
you're never alone <3
Anonymous
30th Mar 2019 00:19am
This hurts so much my sweet one. Why do we fall victim of our own hearts? I'm always here. You know that, little one. Hugs and love to you. xx J
30th Mar 2019 00:57am
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30th Mar 2019 1:17am
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30th Mar 2019 4:03am
Brenda.. goddamn this is so powerful.. into my list it belongs.. love you my sister..
Dave
Dave
30th Mar 2019 4:26am
Holay fawk!! What a good write...i quite enjoyed that one..you are so talented
30th Mar 2019 5:10am
30th Mar 2019 2:11pm
On the bleeding edge of seeing it as it is, we face humanity. We sense it....and a few are able to explain the flow of the emotional subtexts buried between taboo and ritual.....like this.
30th Mar 2019 4:06pm
I have a messenger app on Facebook that gives me a word of the day. Today's word popped up while reading your ink here, was lothario. A man who seduces women by pretending to fall in love with them. This was too coincidental to not mention.
Great work here! It packs a nice punch!
Great work here! It packs a nice punch!
Anonymous
30th Mar 2019 4:45pm
tiny gods, i cannot breathe
your ache here... it's like knife, palpable, violent...
it's as tho i am bleeding with you.
all my love to you, beautiful
xo
your ache here... it's like knife, palpable, violent...
it's as tho i am bleeding with you.
all my love to you, beautiful
xo
But you're alive as a poet, Brenda. Intense, powerful and thrilling. Love, Thomas
31st Mar 2019 10:11pm
Bukowski said that love is a dog from hell...powerful poetry Brenda.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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