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Escapist
Her surrogacy
permits me
mouth to breast
to nourish
the climb
of lust
that channels
the nerves
to the one spot
to medicate
worry and indecision
her divide
lovingly granting
my full appraisal
of smooth contours
and glimmering goodness
in pink saturation
her body
calls me
to enter.
permits me
mouth to breast
to nourish
the climb
of lust
that channels
the nerves
to the one spot
to medicate
worry and indecision
her divide
lovingly granting
my full appraisal
of smooth contours
and glimmering goodness
in pink saturation
her body
calls me
to enter.
Published 29th Mar 2019
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Anonymous
29th Mar 2019 6:59pm
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29th Mar 2019 8:24pm
Woah! Escapism or a welcome home?!
"her divide
lovingly granting
my full appraisal
of smooth contours
and glimmering goodness
in pink saturation
her body
calls me
to enter."
....
I absolutely love the way you worded this, T. Simplistic yet says so much!!
"her divide
lovingly granting
my full appraisal
of smooth contours
and glimmering goodness
in pink saturation
her body
calls me
to enter."
....
I absolutely love the way you worded this, T. Simplistic yet says so much!!
29th Mar 2019 10:15pm
Gosh, that would be such a homecoming. Just a sweet little daydream :( Appreciate that it was enjoyed!
29th Mar 2019 10:45pm
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
30th Mar 2019 7:45pm
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31st Mar 2019 00:13am
5th Apr 2019 1:22am
You have such a beautiful gift with words, and the charismatic way you display them to your readers, which can be interrupted as fitting
5th Apr 2019 3:52am
It has taken a long time to find my particular voice. The more I do it, the more it flows. I appreciate this supportive comment coming from someone who equally impresses me with every swirl of ink shared.
5th Apr 2019 1:26pm
Aww...thank you Mr. Sandman.. okay I couldn't refuse...enjoy your day and upcoming weekend handsome
6th Apr 2019 00:39am
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
23rd Apr 2019 6:49pm
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23rd Apr 2019 8:32pm
