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esoteric logic
distasteful thoughts stain the mind
sodomized by the masses
left feeling guilty and ashamed
I cover my nakedness
a bitter boned cigarette ash soul
belies the truth of the excrement
written on the sacrilege hollows of my mind
disdainfully wasted
a vibrant scythe of a smile
feel the disgrace of my false warmth
in your broken neon sunlight
cult black is my dark spirit
a cutting tongue eviscerates the madness
heads roll when I come out to play
on with the show
cyanide candy for the depraved
sweet diseased thoughts...permanently lobotomized
detonation in 3...2...1
Published 27th Mar 2019
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Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
27th Mar 2019 9:14pm
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27th Mar 2019 9:16pm
thank you dearest poet I'm happy you enjoyed this...you made me smile...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
27th Mar 2019 9:16pm
"A vibrant scythe of a smile." For some reason that line stands out for me. I admire your logic and, of course, your superior writing,
thank you dearest Thomas I have to admit I had help on that part...I loved it too and was told I could use it...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
27th Mar 2019 9:33pm
27th Mar 2019 9:36pm
bless and love dearest FeNyX I hope you didn't find it too disturbing...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
27th Mar 2019 10:15pm
A dark dance of words that picks up the beat with every line...unbelievable ink Brenda...bravo!
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
27th Mar 2019 10:16pm
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
27th Mar 2019 10:51pm
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27th Mar 2019 10:52pm
thank you graciously dearest Bender for the love on this dark write...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
27th Mar 2019 11:20pm
28th Mar 2019 00:00am
27th Mar 2019 11:21pm
28th Mar 2019 00:01am
27th Mar 2019 11:26pm
I love everything about this piece Brenda!
Damn you're such an amazing writer
"cult black is my dark spirit
a cutting tongue eviscerates the madness
heads roll when I come out to play
on with the show "
My favorite verse
This is amazing Crim
Fucking outstanding!👏👏
Damn you're such an amazing writer
"cult black is my dark spirit
a cutting tongue eviscerates the madness
heads roll when I come out to play
on with the show "
My favorite verse
This is amazing Crim
Fucking outstanding!👏👏
28th Mar 2019 00:02am
thank you graciously dearest Hunter for such a great comment you brought me smiles...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
27th Mar 2019 11:35pm
28th Mar 2019 00:03am
thank you graciously dearest Poet for the love here you are deeply appreciated...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Anonymous
28th Mar 2019 11:39am
Deep, Dark, beautiful ... just like you
Anonymous
28th Mar 2019 3:00pm
I can almost hear the stiletto clicks as those leather boots of yours connect with the pavement. Your rhythm, your mind...nobody else has that. Dark is sometimes the most beautiful place to go. I love you, beautiful Dark Angel...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
