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Haiku
silenced?
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silenced?
Written by
cabcool
Published
26th Mar 2019
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Quiet Haiku
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This is an entry in the Quiet Haiku competition.
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#haiku
#silence
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Re. silenced?
Ahavati
(Tams)
26th Mar 2019 10:44pm
The turquoise was a bit difficult to read, but it's a very nice visual poem. Very impactful.
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Re: Re. silenced?
cabcool
27th Mar 2019 3:10am
Very helpful feedback, Ahavati. Thank you.
I will go back and adjust the font colour, which had seemed OK on my perhaps brighter screen.
Sincerely
cab.
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