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Unabated Love
Unabted she waits for naught
unattended, but still affected by night
her hand wobbles
as words do somehow fumble
I kiss each tear and can taste the sea
each drop felt deep inside of me
she nuzzles close into affection
I fain hesitation and stroke her hair
her eyes see into my substance
curving at the heart at hand
her breaths stop then ease with comfort
matching the pace of the mood
what's next is understood
her black lace fell to the floor
and I felt every bit of her soul
the moon danced in the distance
blushing at the beauty it saw
she mounted with much anticipation
and I succumbed to the intent
entwined, we the perfect fit
for one night in an imperfect world
unattended, but still affected by night
her hand wobbles
as words do somehow fumble
I kiss each tear and can taste the sea
each drop felt deep inside of me
she nuzzles close into affection
I fain hesitation and stroke her hair
her eyes see into my substance
curving at the heart at hand
her breaths stop then ease with comfort
matching the pace of the mood
what's next is understood
her black lace fell to the floor
and I felt every bit of her soul
the moon danced in the distance
blushing at the beauty it saw
she mounted with much anticipation
and I succumbed to the intent
entwined, we the perfect fit
for one night in an imperfect world
Published 26th Mar 2019
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26th Mar 2019 00:11am
Beautifully comforting! I felt the tenderness but it still ended with passion. Excellent ink Tim!
Minx
Minx
26th Mar 2019 00:13am
Thank you Minx, passion is usually what is missing. I'm glad you could feel the intent.
26th Mar 2019 00:16am
I need to find a poet to pen something like this for me, lol! Very passionate even in your tenderness.
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26th Mar 2019 00:52am
I'm loving the emotions & descriptions, Tim!! Plus, you used one of my favorite words & one I've only seen used by me..those are very important.;)
26th Mar 2019 1:15am
Romantic and sexy, putting her in the seduction driving seat. Last verse captured the essence of the night time liaison:
she mounted with much anticipation
and I succumbed to the intent
entwined, we the perfect fit
for one night in an imperfect world
she mounted with much anticipation
and I succumbed to the intent
entwined, we the perfect fit
for one night in an imperfect world
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Anonymous
26th Mar 2019 12:46pm
Now that's an intoxicating read to find first thing in the morning. Sounds like someone had a lovely night... :-)
26th Mar 2019 12:49pm
26th Mar 2019 2:53pm
I really loved this. It was tender, and gentle, then passionate. A lot of the subtly erotic poems on this site have a somewhat animalistic tone. Don't get me wrong, that's enjoyable, but something about the nature of this particular poem just really pulled on my heart strings. This write is definitely one of my very favorites. Great job. :)
26th Mar 2019 3:25pm
Thank you so much, I don't write erotica too often but when I do it is filled with feeling.
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