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Give it a sniff
Come on mate,
Don’t be a bore,
Take a deep inhale,
and ask for more.
There’s a little bit of Bovril,
most of it’s just raw egg,
A slight twinge of death,
Some if it’s rotting veg’
I’m not asking you to like it,
I’m just asking you to have a wiff,
come on mate,
just give it a f*****g sniff.
Don’t be a bore,
Take a deep inhale,
and ask for more.
There’s a little bit of Bovril,
most of it’s just raw egg,
A slight twinge of death,
Some if it’s rotting veg’
I’m not asking you to like it,
I’m just asking you to have a wiff,
come on mate,
just give it a f*****g sniff.
Published 22nd Mar 2019
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31st Mar 2019 7:17pm
This can be view from other point, the taking of risk along with the smell of death along with failure. Tight, yes we realize, but tight
