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Tell me
would you, .... could you?
will you, .... can you?
have you, .... are you?
did you, .... do you?
if so, ....
.... .... tell me
will you, .... can you?
have you, .... are you?
did you, .... do you?
if so, ....
.... .... tell me
Published 22nd Mar 2019
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22nd Mar 2019 11:40am
23rd Mar 2019 6:06pm
and of course …. it's all about love, lust, longing and the potential loss of a person to another with the additional agony of just not knowing …. until you are told; or perhaps find out.
22nd Mar 2019 12:33pm
23rd Mar 2019 6:07pm
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2019 6:10pm
i do so love the ellipses...
... they bare more weight than one gives them credit
all the little shards ov heart
... they bare more weight than one gives them credit
all the little shards ov heart
23rd Mar 2019 6:09pm
Their inclusion so wrong yet they convey that frenetic and stuttering mindset of just grasping at all and every nuance to 'clarify' what may or may not happen.
22nd Mar 2019 8:59pm
23rd Mar 2019 6:10pm
2nd Apr 2019 11:28am
2nd Apr 2019 12:08pm
Thank you for the read and comments. A little different from my last few writes. David.
