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River
she loves me
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she loves me
Written by
cabcool
Published
19th Mar 2019
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Author's Note
In this Octet (Copy/paste this link to see larger image:
http://mydo.cx/NWY5OTM4), the successive lines have been contoured (arched) to create articulated symmetry.
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#jealousy
#love
#relationships
#river
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Re. she loves me
Tallen
(earth_empath)
19th Mar 2019 7:31pm
Felt some wry humor to this spill
Loving the graphic, too
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cabcool
20th Mar 2019 2:06am
Ha ha!
I was playing on the well-known "She loves me, she loves me not" expression.
Thanks for the graphic encouragement.
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Re. she loves me
Ahavati
20th Mar 2019 3:41pm
Pucker up! Beautiful presentation!
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Re: Re. she loves me
cabcool
20th Mar 2019 4:48pm
Sincerely, I thank you, Ahavati.
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Re. she loves me
LightWithin256
22nd Mar 2019 3:19pm
I love this! Everything about this was just enjoyable. :) Well done.
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Re: Re. she loves me
cabcool
- Edited 22nd Mar 2019 3:34pm
22nd Mar 2019 3:32pm
She loves it!
(That's you and the poem.)
Seriously: thanks, LightWithin, for reading my work and giving me such encouraging feedback.
I'm glad you love "she loves me." Honoured for the RL inclusion.
Sincerely
cab
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