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Taciturnity
I must have been on my way to
somewhere
else.
I didn’t hear You
hear Your heart
and wetness --
Mind and Body. . .
Soul.
Tried to catch up to You
but You were out
of our earshot range.
We heard each other
faintly……..
By then
I was rethinking
too much
& You
were on Your way
to someone
else.
somewhere
else.
I didn’t hear You
hear Your heart
and wetness --
Mind and Body. . .
Soul.
Tried to catch up to You
but You were out
of our earshot range.
We heard each other
faintly……..
By then
I was rethinking
too much
& You
were on Your way
to someone
else.
Published 18th Mar 2019
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Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
18th Mar 2019 10:13pm
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18th Mar 2019 10:46pm
and a wee bit of sad
sadness on both sides of the fence
thank You for the kind praise, Brother
sadness on both sides of the fence
thank You for the kind praise, Brother
18th Mar 2019 10:32pm
......it's why I can't sleep like a proper
human being
thank You for sharing and kind praise,
Tim
human being
thank You for sharing and kind praise,
Tim
18th Mar 2019 10:49pm
I used to sleep like a baby, I don't know what happened but lately it's been almost nil
18th Mar 2019 10:52pm
18th Mar 2019 10:54pm
19th Mar 2019 1:21am
I feel the sadness. Sigh...hate that for you. Be happy you taught me a new word
"Taciturnity"...new words are so hot.😍
Btw..I don't sleep either. Maybe one or two nights & then go until I'm burnt out. Hope you get some zzzzz's
"Taciturnity"...new words are so hot.😍
Btw..I don't sleep either. Maybe one or two nights & then go until I'm burnt out. Hope you get some zzzzz's
19th Mar 2019 1:52am
19th Mar 2019 1:34am
Hey she could walk to circle k. Bum a cig off someone. And the next thing you know they try to claim her.....ridiculousness
19th Mar 2019 1:53am
absolutely --
anything is possible
until conversation
and or friendship and
fellowship is re-established
appreciate Your read and
share here
anything is possible
until conversation
and or friendship and
fellowship is re-established
appreciate Your read and
share here
19th Mar 2019 2:36pm
19th Mar 2019 4:49pm
19th Mar 2019 4:51pm
20th Mar 2019 1:10am
This is profundity, Tallen.
It's full of ache
and regret, perhaps?
and self mortification
What's the consolation?
Sing a sad song, "I [saw] her first" Tim McGraw: https://youtu.be/7fV6fmBerRg
or
"If ever I see you again" Roberta Flack: https://youtu.be/5JKhb-zutYc
It's full of ache
and regret, perhaps?
and self mortification
What's the consolation?
Sing a sad song, "I [saw] her first" Tim McGraw: https://youtu.be/7fV6fmBerRg
or
"If ever I see you again" Roberta Flack: https://youtu.be/5JKhb-zutYc
20th Mar 2019 1:50am
Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Oct 2022 6:45pm
30th Mar 2019 3:38am
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30th Mar 2019 3:46am
i don't see myself the way You do
in my defense
I am only skilled at feeling deep
and conveying what i feel
but i thank You for reading
and for Your kindness
and praise
in my defense
I am only skilled at feeling deep
and conveying what i feel
but i thank You for reading
and for Your kindness
and praise
30th Mar 2019 3:56am
