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Afflicted

float-in day by day making way by these pills  
tell hell is felt, in awake of my real
truest truths when the proof  escalated in guilt  
extra weight on my shoulders holding takes of my fails  
thats real... admitted,  
now quit it, damn it!
im still,
gifted, just shifted in image of self  
help
sickened in health  
its hell  
afflicted i yell!!!!
Written by hessderict717
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Author's Note
I got writers block, so it ended up short, and for some reason i can never return to an old piece and finish, is anyone else like that? I just feel like each piece has its own emotion, and no matter what i wont feel the same as i did when i first started writing it, if that makes sense.
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