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I値l Be Your Light
Come to me and lay down your woes
Let me hold you, until the feeling goes
I can稚 promise much time, but this
I can promise you, so you always know
That I will be your light in the darkness
Hold your hand when the pain is too much
I won稚 ask you to disclose your fears
I値l just be here if you need my touch
I値l always lend you my shoulder
You don稚 have to cry, but I am here
We don稚 have to talk about it
I just want to be there for you, my dear
I値l be the ear to hear your silent cries
I値l still be here, when the sun does finally rise
I値l wait for you, even if it takes some time
Always your friend, and you池e always mine
If you need some time, that's always fine
If you need to check out, it'll be my sign
I'll seek you in the shadows of the day
When the light seems just too far away
You can count on me, for you致e touched me so
I could never even imagine letting all this go
So should you need me, in the dead of night
Just look for me, and I値l be your light
Let me hold you, until the feeling goes
I can稚 promise much time, but this
I can promise you, so you always know
That I will be your light in the darkness
Hold your hand when the pain is too much
I won稚 ask you to disclose your fears
I値l just be here if you need my touch
I値l always lend you my shoulder
You don稚 have to cry, but I am here
We don稚 have to talk about it
I just want to be there for you, my dear
I値l be the ear to hear your silent cries
I値l still be here, when the sun does finally rise
I値l wait for you, even if it takes some time
Always your friend, and you池e always mine
If you need some time, that's always fine
If you need to check out, it'll be my sign
I'll seek you in the shadows of the day
When the light seems just too far away
You can count on me, for you致e touched me so
I could never even imagine letting all this go
So should you need me, in the dead of night
Just look for me, and I値l be your light
Published 17th Mar 2019
| Edited 23rd Mar 2019
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17th Mar 2019 10:46am
17th Mar 2019 10:48am
Thank you so much, FeNyX, and thank you always for the reads :) Kudos, my friend.
17th Mar 2019 11:05am
I've been reading through your poems this morning and I've liked each and every one I've read so far. You are talented. I'm a fan 😅👏
17th Mar 2019 11:12am
Oh that痴 so sweet of you! Some aren稚 quite as good as others, but the underground has much to teach me! The reads are greatly appreciated, I suppose I need to go catch up on some reads now as well.. many kudos, my friend❤️
17th Mar 2019 11:37am
17th Mar 2019 11:37am
Ah yes, I do agree. Thank you so much for the comment, and as always, the read :) kudos, my friend..
17th Mar 2019 12:13pm
17th Mar 2019 12:23pm
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17th Mar 2019 1:32pm
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17th Mar 2019 1:34pm
I agree, I壇 never wish the darkness upon anyone. Thank you for the read, the love, and always the comment❤️
17th Mar 2019 2:10pm
17th Mar 2019 2:21pm
Oh I'm so glad you've enjoyed it, devilschild :) thank you for the read, and for the comment as well❤️
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17th Mar 2019 3:07pm
Ah, I swear you all stroke my ego too much! I love that you致e enjoyed this poem. But this is just how I am, I知 not sure how to be any other way. Thank you so much for the read, the comment and always the love. Many kudos to you, my friend❤️
17th Mar 2019 3:24pm
You're incredibly selfless. That is love. I quite enjoyed your writing too. I see that you are fairly new... Happy to have you here at DU :)
17th Mar 2019 3:26pm
Oh thank you! Happy to be here. Thanks for the read as well as your comment, it痴 all greatly appreciated :)
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17th Mar 2019 5:03pm
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17th Mar 2019 5:08pm
Why thank you! I appreciate the read, as well as the love and comment :) kudos, my friend.
17th Mar 2019 6:52pm
That was deep i felt like i was standing on the edge and looking into an abyss and seeing your words you wrote reflected back at me in a moving kaleidoscope of images. Wow just stunning thankyou.
17th Mar 2019 6:56pm
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17th Mar 2019 7:31pm
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17th Mar 2019 7:32pm
Oh that warms my heart! You池e too kind, thank you for the read, for the love and for the comment. It痴 all great appreciated❤️
17th Mar 2019 7:53pm
Wow, delicate and touching piece of work. You are the friend or significant other we all need.
Happy St. Patty's Day to you.
Happy St. Patty's Day to you.
17th Mar 2019 7:55pm
Wow. You literally just bore that news to me, haha I didn稚 even know! Happy St. Patty痴 Day to you too, and thank you for the reads and comment! Kudos, my friend❤️
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19th Mar 2019 11:23pm
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21st Mar 2019 6:32pm
Oh thank you, Daniella❤️ You池e too kind! Thank you for the read, the love and the comment :)
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20th Mar 2019 11:55pm
So tender the lines
That light the way
Too breach edges
Where darkness plays
Like so many before me, the write was soothing, calming. Great read
That light the way
Too breach edges
Where darkness plays
Like so many before me, the write was soothing, calming. Great read
21st Mar 2019 6:31pm
Oh thank you, awakenedsoul. I greatly appreciated the read and comment, kudos my friend.
21st Mar 2019 7:18pm
You be the lantern that containeth E舐endil's star and I be frodo baggins, on a journey far. My security blanket, my warm glass of milk, I have been lulled and born again, a baby in silk.
27th Mar 2019 7:25am
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2019 11:15am
Beautiful heart felt poem girl:)
22nd Mar 2019 1:43pm
Thank you, SP! For the read, the love and the comment :) always, kudos, my friend.
26th Mar 2019 6:07am
Just stumbled upon your poems; had not noticed you before. Very touching, (not always in a gentle way- but good poetry can be touchy in a number of ways!). Encouaging you to continue putting pen to paper and sharing more of that mind with us!
26th Mar 2019 6:12am
Haha, thank you I think? And kudos for the read and comment :) thanks for encouragement as well, having writers block these days!
1st Apr 2019 2:35am
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2nd Jul 2019 00:41am
2nd Jul 2019 1:15am
8th Jul 2019 10:07am
In these dark times be the light my friend
Catch a falling star
keep it within a lantern
better that then let it die
Excellent write Liv
Catch a falling star
keep it within a lantern
better that then let it die
Excellent write Liv
8th Jul 2019 1:28pm
I always try, sometimes the light flickers but I値l always try. Thank you for reading, Carpe, and commenting! And of course for the generous RL add❤️
11th Jul 2019 4:04am
11th Jul 2019 4:18am
Thank you, and for stopping in for the read and comment! I appreciate the love❤️
