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TO A MIDDLE AGED PIN UP
i'd ask, "What does it feel to pose
with just thong and ring for your clothes?
It's clear you have this glow within
of happiness in your own skin,
that amorous propensity
is unhindered by gravity.
Your example gives hope to me
who in few months will be sixty".
with just thong and ring for your clothes?
It's clear you have this glow within
of happiness in your own skin,
that amorous propensity
is unhindered by gravity.
Your example gives hope to me
who in few months will be sixty".
Author's Note
The 'pin up' was cut out from a newspaper women's Valentine's Day special about issues of sex in various age decades. Each decade column had a pic of a woman naked (or very near totally that) from the decade posed with carefully arranged limbs. The one I cut out headed the "50's +" column.
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Re. TO A MIDDLE AGED PIN UP
17th Mar 2019 9:25am
Re. TO A MIDDLE AGED PIN UP
Anonymous
17th Mar 2019 11:27am
Loved this!
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Re. TO A MIDDLE AGED PIN UP
17th Mar 2019 11:47am
Oh enjoyed it so 💓
Obviously the picture police didn't enjoy it as much..
Obviously the picture police didn't enjoy it as much..
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Re: Re. TO A MIDDLE AGED PIN UP
17th Mar 2019 11:54am
I didn't put a picture up on this page - I would have had to look for it online first assuming it was going to be shown. I just have the paper cut out in my kitchen.
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17th Mar 2019 11:55am
Re. TO A MIDDLE AGED PIN UP
17th Mar 2019 1:35pm
was a good piece of ageing favorite line----- who in few months will be sixty- nice young age
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Re. TO A MIDDLE AGED PIN UP
60 is the new 40! Especially if you haven't slept on the streets with tobacco, drugs, and alcohol your whole life!
It's a good poem, Solomon. And because breasts are allowed to be shown in avatars, I see no issue with them being displayed in poems.
It's a good poem, Solomon. And because breasts are allowed to be shown in avatars, I see no issue with them being displayed in poems.
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17th Mar 2019 8:26pm
I have been fortunate with my own health in the way exampled (I have never smoked), still with my own teeth (unfillinged) and no abnormal blood pressure so if you've got it why not feel good about it? (Although I am aware of people younger than me that have already had hip replacements for example as well as problems brought on by obesity). In the West we are generally younger at 50 than our grandparents were,
Re. TO A MIDDLE AGED PIN UP
17th Mar 2019 4:15pm
Oh, I love this gem my handsome King...age is nothing but a number in my little black book
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