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Our Little Secret
Mm, what are these secrets that you keep?
To know me is to love me, my dear
But your feelings for me, they run too deep
The water is nice and warm, though...
Would you care to join me?
You won’t tell anyone, I hope?
My sweet boy, you play with fire now,
It could just as easily warm your heart,
Or we could burn the whole world down.
I assure you I won’t play games with you,
Come now, seduce me, tease me, oh, just to please me.
But do you want to know what could’ve saved you?
Ah, well I guess you should have listened more closely.
To know me is to love me, my dear
But your feelings for me, they run too deep
The water is nice and warm, though...
Would you care to join me?
You won’t tell anyone, I hope?
My sweet boy, you play with fire now,
It could just as easily warm your heart,
Or we could burn the whole world down.
I assure you I won’t play games with you,
Come now, seduce me, tease me, oh, just to please me.
But do you want to know what could’ve saved you?
Ah, well I guess you should have listened more closely.
Published 16th Mar 2019
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16th Mar 2019 1:49pm
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16th Mar 2019 2:02pm
Oh that’s so kind of you! I look forward to being better as I learn from you all that I look up to as writers :)
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16th Mar 2019 2:32pm
seductively beautiful in a tempting kind of way
dangerously lovely lady...
love Brenda 💕
dangerously lovely lady...
love Brenda 💕
16th Mar 2019 2:32pm
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16th Mar 2019 2:57pm
Hahaha you always make me smile with your comments, I look forward to them most. I’m so glad you enjoyed it ;D
16th Mar 2019 3:36pm
16th Mar 2019 3:38pm
Thank you, and thank you for the read! I'm so happy you enjoyed it and your comments are so appreciated❤️
16th Mar 2019 4:24pm
16th Mar 2019 4:39pm
And I like your comment, SO, thank you for that. And for the read, your words are always appreciated!
16th Mar 2019 5:20pm
This reeled me in girlie....
On another site, instead of Pandora.. I used secrets in my profile name (that's a secret ) but it reminds me of days when I wrote like this.
Cleverly written, put a smile on my face too...
On another site, instead of Pandora.. I used secrets in my profile name (that's a secret ) but it reminds me of days when I wrote like this.
Cleverly written, put a smile on my face too...
16th Mar 2019 5:25pm
Oh I’m so glad you enjoyed it! :) my first write of this sort I think, so I’m so pleased with the feedback!
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17th Mar 2019 8:20pm
Oh you’re so sweet! I’m so glad my writing is being enjoyed here at the underground. Thank you for the reads, love and comments! Kudos❤️
17th Mar 2019 8:13pm
17th Mar 2019 8:19pm
Haha, I’ll bet you can! Thanks for the reads, comments and love. It’s greatly appreciated :)
26th Jul 2019 1:33am
Sometimes in Real Life it is so hard to Seduce and Be Seduced at the same time. Have you found that out??
26th Jul 2019 5:20am
Haha no, I haven’t. Thanks for making me think about though, don’t think I ever have. Thanks also for the read and the comment!
26th Jul 2019 5:49am
It is like the Old saying, It Takes Two To Tango as well as to do anything else that is worth doing. Especially When Passion is Involved.
