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Why Now?
Does everyone have to go the same way
Overdose on pain meds what a shame
But hey what’s another life no ones counting
It’s like a lottery game
a body drops every time they draw a name
But who’s to blame
I’m really over this my heart can’t take it anymore
It just makes it all so hard
What am I supposed to do now that your gone
I wasn’t ready to let go
Come back please
Just another second
I’m begging on my knees
Don’t leave me here to grief
Overdose on pain meds what a shame
But hey what’s another life no ones counting
It’s like a lottery game
a body drops every time they draw a name
But who’s to blame
I’m really over this my heart can’t take it anymore
It just makes it all so hard
What am I supposed to do now that your gone
I wasn’t ready to let go
Come back please
Just another second
I’m begging on my knees
Don’t leave me here to grief
Published 16th Mar 2019
Author's Note
To my grandmother who decided life was to painful to live anymore. I hope you can see this wherever your soul is and that you know I’m thinking of you.
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16th Mar 2019 7:25am
16th Mar 2019 7:28am
16th Mar 2019 7:31am
God, I could feeeel this. I'm so sorry, my heart breaks for you... I can't even imagine, as how close I am with my grandmother </3 so much love and kudos to you
16th Mar 2019 7:34am
16th Mar 2019 1:56pm
Damn felt this deep in my soul
Sorry to hear about your loss🙏
It hurts to know when someone you love is in constant pain in for me it's my parents.
It just sucks when you can't do anything to help but at least she's not suffering anymore
Powerful piece👏👏🙏
Sorry to hear about your loss🙏
It hurts to know when someone you love is in constant pain in for me it's my parents.
It just sucks when you can't do anything to help but at least she's not suffering anymore
Powerful piece👏👏🙏
16th Mar 2019 10:09pm
She’s not gone thank god she made it to the hospital in time just no one told me but she’s gonna be okay it’s just hurt like hell
17th Mar 2019 2:50pm
18th Mar 2019 12:51pm
word. Addiction creates a lot of suffering, I am glad you are channeling this pain into art <3
18th Mar 2019 3:32pm
23rd Mar 2019 4:30am
Your not so invisible Peeekaboo I see You and most importantly i really felt this and im sure your grandma did to and god bless your grandmother she has one beautiful granddaughter who touches peoples souls with her words.Thankyou for this and thankyou for your comments on my verse really appreciate it. X
23rd Mar 2019 4:33am
Thanks and I’m sure you call all the girls beautiful lol and thanks for your comment it’s sweet like you I bet. And I was just speaking my mind when I commented on your poem it’s np.
11th May 2019 2:34am
Very deep and most of all very well expressed. I felt the deep hurt through the whole poem. Your truly blessed with a talent that allows you to reach deep down and touch so many.. Glad that your grand mother is okay. Keep spilling those words on paper to share. Thanks for sharing..
