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Heartbreak Suicide
The streets are a little more quiet than usual
I can hear her walking away
Knowing another will make her happy soon
She feels no pain
But the man remains alone
His bottle remains full
Only positive emotions can be shown
Any other is shown by a fool
(But we have to keep going)
Life is a riddle
The streets widen
As i stand in the middle
On my knees dying
I dont know how longer i can take it
Knowing this isnt the last storm
Lying in a pothole on the pavement
Waiting to get ran over
I can hear her walking away
Knowing another will make her happy soon
She feels no pain
But the man remains alone
His bottle remains full
Only positive emotions can be shown
Any other is shown by a fool
(But we have to keep going)
Life is a riddle
The streets widen
As i stand in the middle
On my knees dying
I dont know how longer i can take it
Knowing this isnt the last storm
Lying in a pothole on the pavement
Waiting to get ran over
Published 15th Mar 2019
| Edited 24th Apr 2019
Author's Note
Nothing but dark ink seems to ever come out lately. Times have been emotionally difficult and unusual for a good while now. Just gotta adapt. I'm sure things will get brighter soon.
1/18/19 10:11a.m.
1/18/19 10:11a.m.
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Anonymous
16th Mar 2019 1:42pm
Heartbreaking. Captures the suffering of being alive and in love.
30th Jun 2019 8:51am
This one hit hard,
This write reminded me of old pain I felt with my first love who I was with on and off since 17.
But yeah this hit home for me.
Loved this so much
This write reminded me of old pain I felt with my first love who I was with on and off since 17.
But yeah this hit home for me.
Loved this so much
