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Angel
She must have fallen from heaven
After stealing the life elixir
became a mercurial little girl
She looks as fresh as a white daisy
Just peeping out the ground to see
at the age of nine years old
just starts to know this world
Still remember the scene
the first day she came in
wearing a shoulder sling
for she fell while skateboarding
I felt the pain from her pale skin
but she said nothing would stop her from trying
What a sharp contrast I saw
The petite torso lives a giant soul
that’s confined by her tiny contour
but it can’t control her wild thought
She's my beloved student Angel
a pretty and wild little white daisy
making my world bright and shinny
I want her to know how much it means to me
No matter how much she’s fussy and crazy
After stealing the life elixir
became a mercurial little girl
She looks as fresh as a white daisy
Just peeping out the ground to see
at the age of nine years old
just starts to know this world
Still remember the scene
the first day she came in
wearing a shoulder sling
for she fell while skateboarding
I felt the pain from her pale skin
but she said nothing would stop her from trying
What a sharp contrast I saw
The petite torso lives a giant soul
that’s confined by her tiny contour
but it can’t control her wild thought
She's my beloved student Angel
a pretty and wild little white daisy
making my world bright and shinny
I want her to know how much it means to me
No matter how much she’s fussy and crazy
Author's Note
I am lucky to have a real angel in my life....
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
14th Mar 2019 2:12am
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Re: Re. Angel
14th Mar 2019 2:15am
Hey Bender, glad to have your read. It has been for two months I couldn't write anything. Luckily I am back and write some.
Love
Jasmine
Love
Jasmine
Re. Angel
14th Mar 2019 2:15am
What a beautiful flowing thought along this piece...fire spirits are only balanced by water...lovely warm feelings
love
jeff
love
jeff
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Re: Re. Angel
14th Mar 2019 2:38am
Re. Angel
14th Mar 2019 1:36pm
Re: Re. Angel
14th Mar 2019 3:02pm
Hey Hunter, thank you so much for the read.
Nice to meet you here.
love
Jasmine
Nice to meet you here.
love
Jasmine
Re. Angel
17th Mar 2019 4:50pm
Re: Re. Angel
17th Mar 2019 4:57pm
Glad to have your approval Daniel :)
Thank you for the always support.
Love
Jasmine
Thank you for the always support.
Love
Jasmine
Re. Angel
21st Mar 2019 2:36pm
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21st Mar 2019 2:52pm
Re. Angel
24th Mar 2019 5:41pm
I love the purity of this poem, evocative of the misadventures of childhood, and what a poet you are, to be able to relate to your student so sweetly and truly. Your own inner child is alive and well.
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Re: Re. Angel
25th Mar 2019 2:14pm
Thank you my dear friend for the read and thought. I love my student indeed. She's as pure as a withe daisy.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
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Anonymous
25th Mar 2019 2:17pm
Aww made me warm, such a sweet tribute RJ - your heart is beautiful <3

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Re: Re. Angel
25th Mar 2019 2:33pm
Thank you Sophie for the nice feedback. Always appreciate your comment.
Love
Jasmine
Love
Jasmine
Re. Angel
30th Mar 2019 4:16pm
Re: Re. Angel
31st Mar 2019 4:05pm
Thank you my dear friend for the always support! You make me know how good I am!
Love
Jasmine
Love
Jasmine
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
3rd Jan 2020 3:17pm
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Re: Re. Angel
5th Jan 2020 7:40am
I can't believe how you can be such a nice person...
Thank you so much for your support.
Love
Lasmine
Thank you so much for your support.
Love
Lasmine
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
5th Jan 2020 9:36am
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Re: Re. Angel
5th Jan 2020 5:27pm
Thank you for sharing your true feelings. They are meaningful to me. I am so blessed to have your read.
Love
Jasmine
Love
Jasmine
Re. Angel
14th Jan 2020 3:40am
Beautiful and extremely affectionate... Great writing! SO sweet - I loved it :)
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Re: Re. Angel
14th Jan 2020 3:48am