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SENRYU-ACTING OUT
Stop! I’ve been miscast
Are you sure this is my script?
Hey author? AUTHOR?
Are you sure this is my script?
Hey author? AUTHOR?
Published 13th Mar 2019
Author's Note
Have you ever felt misplaced in your own life? Struggling for purpose? I do all the time. Even though I have much for which to be grateful. Today...floundering a bit...tomorrow I'll be a rainbow trout.
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To my mind you've been well cast as a skillful, clever poet, and here's three lines of evidence.
14th Mar 2019 1:19am
Thank you Thomas! I hang out with some pretty amazing, erudite, in both book learn'in and life learn'in, poets. I am a benefactor of your talent. Thank you for the comment 😁
14th Mar 2019 1:00am
Oh my goodness, yes! How did I end up here?! And yet, it's mostly pretty sweet...
16th Mar 2019 7:57am
Thank you Titanium! You are so right. I think of a passage from a Natalie Merchant song, "I tell you life is sweet in spite of the misery. It's so much more, be grateful"
Anonymous
14th Mar 2019 8:29pm
We all lose sense of direction from time to time - but being lost in life makes you work harder to find the true purpose...
you’re quite a master of this form Bob :)
Rainbow trout 🤣🤣
you’re quite a master of this form Bob :)
Rainbow trout 🤣🤣
