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Greedy Happy
.
He's a noisy lover
when grazing between
Attacking my feeding trough
Greedy happy pig for want of
my juices
I have no complaints
when he's noisy
He's a noisy lover
when grazing between
Attacking my feeding trough
Greedy happy pig for want of
my juices
I have no complaints
when he's noisy
Published 13th Mar 2019
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Anonymous
13th Mar 2019 2:56pm
Eloquent, reread as you might want to clean up and then repost...but I fully understand the intent and can appreciate the desire be absorbed between and into a a delicious treat!
Thankyou for commenting 😊
Nope was a quick whimsical thought of
my lovers noisy ways when on it
Happy with its haphazard approach
Bit like his 😆
Nope was a quick whimsical thought of
my lovers noisy ways when on it
Happy with its haphazard approach
Bit like his 😆
Anonymous
13th Mar 2019 3:09pm
damn...it must be sweet and a delicious eat!!!!
13th Mar 2019 3:15pm
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14th Mar 2019 1:12pm
Not always appropriate to be loud & expressive
But..we have our vocal moments indeed!
But..we have our vocal moments indeed!
