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Bring Me Your Spring
I am lost
drifting thru the night
delicate dust swept out to the breeze
not seen, not heard, not understood
your sunlight's shining in
beckoning
but I am dormant
I sit and wait
watching in wonder as those create
I just hesitate
bring to me your spring
where refulgence airs anew
where we dress down and open up
not just hearts but minds
cast out slowly your poetic soul
on fractal lines of gold
undulate me with your heat
as we meld from two to one
lucent thought, beauty brought about
drifting thru the night
delicate dust swept out to the breeze
not seen, not heard, not understood
your sunlight's shining in
beckoning
but I am dormant
I sit and wait
watching in wonder as those create
I just hesitate
bring to me your spring
where refulgence airs anew
where we dress down and open up
not just hearts but minds
cast out slowly your poetic soul
on fractal lines of gold
undulate me with your heat
as we meld from two to one
lucent thought, beauty brought about
Published 13th Mar 2019
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13th Mar 2019 12:14pm
Some of my favorite words are in this poem: beckon, dormant, fractal, undulate.
And I LOVE how undulate is used here. Well done!
And I LOVE how undulate is used here. Well done!
13th Mar 2019 12:15pm
Anonymous
13th Mar 2019 1:01pm
There's a movement to this one that is so soothing. And just a bit titillating. A lovely read for this foggy morning!
13th Mar 2019 1:03pm
Thanks Willow, the rain is just wrapping up here and actually might get some warmth
13th Mar 2019 2:11pm
Oh, love! I swear I follow the most amazing poets... “bring to me your spring,
where refulgence airs anew,
where we dress down and open up,
not just hearts but minds“ Yes, yes and more yes. That was so beautiful! Feeling swept up in the spring of the underground this morning... <3
where refulgence airs anew,
where we dress down and open up,
not just hearts but minds“ Yes, yes and more yes. That was so beautiful! Feeling swept up in the spring of the underground this morning... <3
13th Mar 2019 3:35pm
Anonymous
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13th Mar 2019 8:48pm
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13th Mar 2019 8:50pm
Thank you J, I've been inspired and it brings out the best in me. You are too kind
13th Mar 2019 9:44pm
13th Mar 2019 9:46pm
13th Mar 2019 9:49pm
You have quite a vocabulary, and know how to use it. But it's the context that shines here. Excellent work!
13th Mar 2019 9:51pm
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
13th Mar 2019 9:59pm
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13th Mar 2019 10:05pm
