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Mortally
Hardly dead
amidst
deadened
banter
Hurts me
as well
from
our
absence
of
laughter.
Good
Bye
today. . .
no more
verses
that come
to matter
no more
ink
across Your
platter
see You
later
in the
forever
and
ever
after.
…………………………………….Mortally wounded.
Published 12th Mar 2019
| Edited 13th Mar 2019
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13th Mar 2019 00:35am
Felt ... funny how the wounds can seem to open of their own volition even while sleeping ... Bless and much love ..
13th Mar 2019 00:37am
agree
this is my response to a Brother's
dramatic
vacancy in the Deep (end of the pool) here
and his floating towards the SHALLOW end.
I had to spill this feel outta of me......
Hoping no shrapnel scraped You
this is my response to a Brother's
dramatic
vacancy in the Deep (end of the pool) here
and his floating towards the SHALLOW end.
I had to spill this feel outta of me......
Hoping no shrapnel scraped You
13th Mar 2019 1:00am
No and thank you for thinking of such but no bother if caught full ... what needs to out must be outed ... collateral considerations be damned ... Bless and love ...
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
13th Mar 2019 1:01am
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13th Mar 2019 1:18am
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
13th Mar 2019 1:02am
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13th Mar 2019 1:11am
No words Tallen
Tears
I know you dont get how much your words touch everyone.
I needed this one for many reasons Love
Tears
I know you dont get how much your words touch everyone.
I needed this one for many reasons Love
I know the Feel
not so much words
and so
maybe You're right
(honored for the RL add)
take care Precious Sister
not so much words
and so
maybe You're right
(honored for the RL add)
take care Precious Sister
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
13th Mar 2019 1:55am
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13th Mar 2019 2:23am
13th Mar 2019 4:46pm
i like the slight rhyme that you have going on. it's not hard and demanding. just there, enough to make it sing. well done.
13th Mar 2019 4:59pm
i don't rhyme too often
or throughout an entire spill
and so I thank You for
massaging my ego here
(i don't think i rhyme very well)
these rhymes felt like i could spill
a msg using very little
thank You for reading and sharing
or throughout an entire spill
and so I thank You for
massaging my ego here
(i don't think i rhyme very well)
these rhymes felt like i could spill
a msg using very little
thank You for reading and sharing
