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Damn, She's Hot revised

I cannot believe, it's so surreal    
I have wanted her for so long  
damn, she's hot    
And she's mine    
    
everyone notices us    
I can't wipe this grin away    
yeah, she's a badass    
wait until you see her sway    
   
tonight's the night    
I know it is    
I've practiced and practiced gotta get everything right    
   
Oh shit, the clock is ticking!    
now's the time    
Fuck! I'm in her    
Damn, she's hot!   
   
come on now    
hold on, Don't    
you got this    
make it last    
   
heart pounding    
hips grinding    
here she comes    
Oh, Oh, mgmmm,    
I can't hold out anymore    
   
Damn, she's hot!    
This is it! Here it comes    
shaft flying,    
perfect synchronization    
   
Oh feel the adrenaline    
the rush of heat    
blasting through your body you're pushed back in your seat    
   
you're vision is clouded    
and you smell her aroma lingering in the air    
you pull out if her slowly    
wobbling to your feet    
   
every eye is on you    
Oh shit, what do I do?!    
then they erupt in    
catcalls and praise    
Damn, she's hot!    
   
your smile returns    
as you realize    
you're ready to go again    
and so  does she    
   
   
 
Written by CSD1558 (Minxy)
Published | Edited 19th Sep 2019
Author's Note
This is about my first official race on a quarter mile strip in my dream car, a juiced Buick Grand National. And yes, for me it was a sexual experience. Wobbly legs and wet seat
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