CriTiquE

You do have one word misused, David...
it's in stanza one on line two...

you have made ''shot's'' a possessive...
and that, my friend, is a Boo Boo...

Properly written the word is a plural...
to show that there is more than one...

It is written, ''shots''...sans ap-os-tro-phe...
for plural add ...S... it's more fun...