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WHITE ANGEL
White whispy wings above my head
Are you from God?
You must be from Heaven
Suspending over me
Such as a baby confined to their crib
I know not the reason
Nor will I ever understand
Swirling wings swimming there
A silhouette of pale white shimmer
Will not reveal her face
Frozen are my hands and limbs
My eyes can still dance side to side in their warm sockets
But why are you here for me?
I stare into the cloud of mystery
Fascinated
This is a one-time thing
The silence as I lie so still
It is after a storm is
Calm waters quiet my internal storm
Staring...just staring...
This white fog
As I envy
I feel at peace with it
Are you from God?
You must be from Heaven
Suspending over me
Such as a baby confined to their crib
I know not the reason
Nor will I ever understand
Swirling wings swimming there
A silhouette of pale white shimmer
Will not reveal her face
Frozen are my hands and limbs
My eyes can still dance side to side in their warm sockets
But why are you here for me?
I stare into the cloud of mystery
Fascinated
This is a one-time thing
The silence as I lie so still
It is after a storm is
Calm waters quiet my internal storm
Staring...just staring...
This white fog
As I envy
I feel at peace with it
Published 6th Mar 2019
Author's Note
I actually did have this experience. One night I was laying there trying to fall asleep, when I saw this thick white fog suspended in air. It seemed creepy, but the vibe I got was a peaceful one and I just kept staring at in awe. Trying to figure out if it really was a supernatural being, as I do believe in God's angels as well as the devil has them too.
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7th Mar 2019 4:02pm
I enjoyed reading this a lot. The mystical vibe you created caught my attention immediately. I do believe in angels.They are such beautiful invisible things and always give out comfort and peace to the people who believe in them.
Beautifully written Linda!
Love
Jasmine
Beautifully written Linda!
Love
Jasmine
7th Mar 2019 4:27pm
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7th Mar 2019 7:22pm
11th Mar 2019 8:45pm
Careful it isn't a white pigeon or dove, you don't want to be under a bird.
In all serious, gave me feeling of trying to look into the beyond. Very nice poem.
In all serious, gave me feeling of trying to look into the beyond. Very nice poem.
11th Mar 2019 11:50pm
