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Alone in my haze
Alone in my haze all day..
Floating through the universe.
Hooray! What's left to say?
Lets lift
and drift away..
Sinking slow into the sky,
sailing towards the ancient sun..
Serene scenes
here I go..
ever so high...
Glancing down upon the dream,
dancing to the cosmic theme..
Galactic grooves,
sounds that soothe the sad souls..
Falling deep into the dark abyss..
Traveling at the speed of light,
Oh please
toss me in the breeze
ever so free..
Alone in my haze all day..
Floating through the universe.
Hooray! What's left to say?
Lets lift
and drift away..
Floating through the universe.
Hooray! What's left to say?
Lets lift
and drift away..
Sinking slow into the sky,
sailing towards the ancient sun..
Serene scenes
here I go..
ever so high...
Glancing down upon the dream,
dancing to the cosmic theme..
Galactic grooves,
sounds that soothe the sad souls..
Falling deep into the dark abyss..
Traveling at the speed of light,
Oh please
toss me in the breeze
ever so free..
Alone in my haze all day..
Floating through the universe.
Hooray! What's left to say?
Lets lift
and drift away..
Published 5th Mar 2019
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5th Mar 2019 10:53pm
5th Mar 2019 11:47pm
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6th Mar 2019 00:42am
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6th Mar 2019 12:23pm
Thanks for reading Barona! 🙏
Intensely wonderful sounding dream
I would imagine that would be liberating as fuk
Intensely wonderful sounding dream
I would imagine that would be liberating as fuk
6th Mar 2019 2:43am
6th Mar 2019 12:25pm
Thanks for reading!
Yea it can be a nice space won't lie though it can be a dark space as well
Appreciate you stopping by🙏
Yea it can be a nice space won't lie though it can be a dark space as well
Appreciate you stopping by🙏
6th Mar 2019 4:04am
6th Mar 2019 12:32pm
6th Mar 2019 9:55pm
I enjoyed reading the poem and thought it is well written. However, I thought there were occasional words or phrases that seemed to jar with the otherwise excellent writing....for example,"Hooray", "oh please", and "ever so"....I felt these didn't quite match the tone you set.
7th Mar 2019 10:57am
