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Bleed
hundred proof rage deeply felt
I have flash burns...
standing too close to the flame
you are passion
I am by nature drawn to you
you attract me pulling me tightly
then push away
push...pull
my insides are in knots
you know I feel you
rejection of who I am...I fear
I showed you my darker nature,..straight off
I've lost others to it
I didn't want to lose you too
tell me about the shadow-free soul
because that's a new one on me
drunk off your rage...I cry
curl inside myself and lick my wounds
I wasn't prepared for your blade when it struck
watch me bleed out...
dead now to my emotions
Published 4th Mar 2019
| Edited 5th Mar 2019
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- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
5th Mar 2019 00:01am
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5th Mar 2019 00:08am
thank you dearest Warrior for standing so close you feel my pain as though a cut of your own...I cherish you my friend...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
5th Mar 2019 00:48am
5th Mar 2019 00:49am
thank you dearest FeNyX though not intended to cut...bless and love...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
5th Mar 2019 00:51am
5th Mar 2019 00:52am
5th Mar 2019 4:16am
To read this rouses old demons in me. Do not fret, it is not you I find inferior in this. See it as a blessing in disguise. You need not the weak, and if your corner is too dark, then so be it.
5th Mar 2019 4:20am
thank you beautiful Doll for your understanding no the weak cannot fathom the depths of what is really there...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda ❤
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda ❤
5th Mar 2019 5:34am
You know my heart breaks for you. Those we love the most do incredible soul damage. Sometimes we'll never understand the rhyme or reason..most likely those damn demons we're all fleeing from. I hope you get your happy back..I know this one put a dent in your heart. Hopefully you can get some closure. I've struggled with this damn concept for some time now. Love ya 💔💕
5th Mar 2019 11:19am
thank you beautiful for feeling my pain here so deeply...I'm alright today...hugs on your own pain...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
5th Mar 2019 8:54am
5th Mar 2019 11:20am
Sometimes we need to bleed out that pain. God knows I have more than a few times.
Great poetry
Great poetry
5th Mar 2019 11:20am
thank you dearest DC for the love and understanding of this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
5th Mar 2019 9:31pm
Your emotions lend you power, Brenda, and make for great poetry. You bleed, and I try to read every drop.
5th Mar 2019 9:37pm
Not the blade of a knife: it's a 2-edged sword.
Perhaps, though, there's a transfusion in the transaction.
The universe was made from emptiness. Dark matter out, negative space refilled.
This is obviously more than a poem. I feel the feeling.
Great weave.
Perhaps, though, there's a transfusion in the transaction.
The universe was made from emptiness. Dark matter out, negative space refilled.
This is obviously more than a poem. I feel the feeling.
Great weave.
10th Mar 2019 8:12pm
You still can make it if 911 is called.
Come to think about it possibly not, because the motherfuckas are slow as hell. But overall I really enjoyed this write.
Come to think about it possibly not, because the motherfuckas are slow as hell. But overall I really enjoyed this write.
8th Jul 2019 11:43am
Crimsin i want that you show me the darker side of you, i will not run will not flee, I will walk towards you, i will open my arms open my soul and embrace you, hold you tight and show that there is no need for fear as your not losing me....
8th Jul 2019 6:41pm
thank you dearest poet so many are repelled by my darkness I'm grateful for your acceptance...I can only be myself I'm happy you like this part of me...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
8th Jul 2019 7:05pm
