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Oblation

 
on the ledge,
the edge of
loneliness

You let me fall. . .

into Your eyes
gasping for air
I struggled to
keep afloat
my conscious
love for You.

desperately, though,
I wanted to free
myself of my need
for companionship.

You were kind
You were intoxicating
and I think You held
more common sense
when You left me
for life

and living.



We are both now Free.
Written by Tallen (earth_empath)
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