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no place like home
sweetheart you're beautiful
hell yes incredible
but gotta tell you this
honey you are not her
you got beauty and grace
with that your pretty face
but I must tell it straight
cutie you are not her
you are oh so awesome
your smile is a blossom
and that perfect bosom
sweetheart you are not her
your eyes are amazing
your gait leaves hearts blazing
your touch is pulsating
but love you are not her
your humor a blessing
your aura refreshing
my friend my darling but
you are simply not her
for she is just that one
unique as that person
moves my heart like no one
my home under the sun
you all are well and good
hope it is understood
yes this heart loves to roam
but there's no place like home
Published 3rd Mar 2019
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3rd Mar 2019 4:34am
great write dearest Cold Ond
sadly with a sting for that not her lady...
wonderful...
love Brenda 🌹
sadly with a sting for that not her lady...
wonderful...
love Brenda 🌹
3rd Mar 2019 4:43am
Telling it like it is, increasing the distance
when friendly invades ones personal space.
Nice rhymes as well.
when friendly invades ones personal space.
Nice rhymes as well.
3rd Mar 2019 5:03am
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- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
3rd Mar 2019 5:41am
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3rd Mar 2019 12:56pm
3rd Mar 2019 4:45pm
Very nice piece ColdFusion dig this very much👏👏 excellently direct and wonderfully composed as well great write!👏👏
