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OH SO 2
Oh so bare your soul—
shattered glass held together
by surface tension
shattered glass held together
by surface tension
Published 2nd Mar 2019
Author's Note
I don't have a lot of personal rules when it comes to writing poetry, but I broke a big one when I wrote this. Anyone care to guess what it is?
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2nd Mar 2019 5:19pm
Well, I've studied it now for 5 min. and can't find anything in structure
or definition of a senryu poem.
Must be a personal problem
PM with answer if you wish. (just keep the question alive)
or definition of a senryu poem.
Must be a personal problem
PM with answer if you wish. (just keep the question alive)
2nd Mar 2019 9:20pm
No idea.... but that was a clever way to get me to re-read some of your others to see if I could figure it out!!
And, like all of them, I like this one.
And, like all of them, I like this one.
2nd Mar 2019 9:26pm
