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Yes it is 3am
A poem with no meaning
no metaphor
no idiom
no consonance dissonance or resonance
just a pile of disjointed words
a bunch who barely stand each other
what meaning would you attain
from such a round up of insoluble group?
life is a journey they say
and at each pit stop
each halt
each pause - whether forced or not is irrelevant
been collecting words
and they have somehow stuck
struck a bond with me yet are at each other's neck inside of my head
sometimes they decide to come out all at once
sometimes they go on a strike or throw tantrums and block me out.
.
no metaphor
no idiom
no consonance dissonance or resonance
just a pile of disjointed words
a bunch who barely stand each other
what meaning would you attain
from such a round up of insoluble group?
life is a journey they say
and at each pit stop
each halt
each pause - whether forced or not is irrelevant
been collecting words
and they have somehow stuck
struck a bond with me yet are at each other's neck inside of my head
sometimes they decide to come out all at once
sometimes they go on a strike or throw tantrums and block me out.
.
Published 2nd Mar 2019
| Edited 19th Mar 2019
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2nd Mar 2019 4:57pm
Yes, seems when we try to force them into some resemblance
of coherent arrangement all that results is a mangled mess,
and much distress.
This wasn't one of those times.
Now...go to bed. :-))
of coherent arrangement all that results is a mangled mess,
and much distress.
This wasn't one of those times.
Now...go to bed. :-))
2nd Mar 2019 5:14pm
Oh, I can relate to this image! I picture them as a bunch of unruly toddlers, or hyper puppies.... it is tricky to get them to fall in line or mean anything at all.
It's annoying when they won't let you sleep. But I think you tamed them perfectly here, for the sentiment is clear. Well done!
It's annoying when they won't let you sleep. But I think you tamed them perfectly here, for the sentiment is clear. Well done!
...or lovable but prickly kittens...always nibbling at your toes...sticking their thorny little paws in your leg...or the end of your nose... Ely
3rd Mar 2019 00:34am
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