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I thought about you today as I gazed out into our past
where daylight never ended
and the moments went too fast
I didn't shed a tear for us, well maybe there was just one
to remind me of all the fun we had
before life took back her sun
I watched in all amazement
as nature ran her course
the seedlings needing tending
as the weeds were in full force
I heard a voice today and thought you had come my way
it was singing about the weather
and happy when skies are grey
I also went by the ocean
and paddled on off to sea
I wondered if you were looking
and caught a glimpse of me
My blues gleamed off the water
and there was a ripple floating by
I reached out my hand to touch it
and saw your love that hid inside
I thought about you today
just like yesterday and the day before
if I sail off in your direction
will you be waiting by the shore
where daylight never ended
and the moments went too fast
I didn't shed a tear for us, well maybe there was just one
to remind me of all the fun we had
before life took back her sun
I watched in all amazement
as nature ran her course
the seedlings needing tending
as the weeds were in full force
I heard a voice today and thought you had come my way
it was singing about the weather
and happy when skies are grey
I also went by the ocean
and paddled on off to sea
I wondered if you were looking
and caught a glimpse of me
My blues gleamed off the water
and there was a ripple floating by
I reached out my hand to touch it
and saw your love that hid inside
I thought about you today
just like yesterday and the day before
if I sail off in your direction
will you be waiting by the shore
Published 1st Mar 2019
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1st Mar 2019 1:37pm
so beautiful is your love and passion
dearest Tim...
great write...
love Brenda ❤
dearest Tim...
great write...
love Brenda ❤
1st Mar 2019 1:39pm
1st Mar 2019 1:41pm
you always reach me dearest Tim no matter the place you are coming from... you're always deeply felt...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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1st Mar 2019 8:56pm
1st Mar 2019 8:52pm
I suspect she will be on the shore, waiting. How could she not? Wonderful job, JusTim.
1st Mar 2019 8:57pm
Anonymous
1st Mar 2019 9:50pm
Timothy! What the heck?? I thought you were writing bad poetry. That's fantastic!
Sad, and rhyming?? Are you becoming me? lol(I wouldn't wish that on my worst enema!).
Great writing, my friend!
MZ.
Sad, and rhyming?? Are you becoming me? lol(I wouldn't wish that on my worst enema!).
Great writing, my friend!
MZ.
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