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Embrace Your Uniqueness

Don't fret my friend  
When darkness looms  
Daylight will appear very soon  

Delight on this thought  
You are different from the rest  
Unlike everyone else  
Hold that firm belief  
 
Embrace your uniqueness  
Start loving yourself
Dispense with loneliness  
Sowed from senseless fears  
 
Be like midnight flower  
Unfurling happily during lonely hour  
Amongst unbudded blooms  
Wishing night never end  
 
Fair beauty, nocturnal bud  
Scenting breeze, its fragrance  
So pure and sweet  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
70 words sans the title with no words repeated. 35 words retained 35 new words added. The 35 words removed includes prepositions that were repeated in the original poem that completes the 35 words such as the ff: in3x  the3x  of2x to2x your2x  
of2x  
Added words [don't, fret, my, when, very, soon, delight, on, this, thought, are, unlike, hold, firm, embrace, uniqueness, start, loving, be, happily,unfurling, during, wishing, fair, beauty, nocturnal, bud, scenting, breeze, its, fragrance, so, pure, and, sweet]  
 
Words removed[ want, call, wishful, delighting, absence, eager, experience, relief, through, suspension, own, home, grown, being, crowded, rooms, no, under, sun, than, to, in, as, of, it, your the seeing only, fairest]  
Some words I removed Is in the retained words because they were repeated in the original poem but only used it once in this poem
 
Author's Note
An entry in Poetic Medic #3 : Don't Pull The Plug On Me Competition sponsored by Ahavati and Johny Blaze
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