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under my skin
Published 28th Feb 2019
Author's Note
View visua poem here (copy/paste link):
http://mydo.cx/NGUzMjk3
This is just feminine phantasy...
http://mydo.cx/NGUzMjk3
This is just feminine phantasy...
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28th Feb 2019 3:50am
I loved the creativity - Wow!
but the Font You chose makes the spill difficult to read even when I enlarged the image.
Just saying............
but the Font You chose makes the spill difficult to read even when I enlarged the image.
Just saying............
28th Feb 2019 5:06am
Thank you, Tallen.
You're right about the font and I have fixed it.
Don't be hesitant in giving this kind of feedback: I welcome it.
You're right about the font and I have fixed it.
Don't be hesitant in giving this kind of feedback: I welcome it.
28th Feb 2019 8:12am
Perfect!
I think because I worked in the printing business for 30+ years when clients would choose funky Fonts and or color combinations I'd be trying to talk 'em out of it and sometimes NOT succeeding.
It's why i felt the need to tell You.
Now I love the spill more (now that i can read it)
I think because I worked in the printing business for 30+ years when clients would choose funky Fonts and or color combinations I'd be trying to talk 'em out of it and sometimes NOT succeeding.
It's why i felt the need to tell You.
Now I love the spill more (now that i can read it)
28th Feb 2019 3:53pm
I appreciate this insight. In the past, I might have been sometimes stubborn about things I wanted my way. Now, however, I do not have to exercise the right to be obscure.
