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Lady In Blue (sonnet)
Moonbeams beckon on my window tonight
dragging me out of this comfort to view
delicate splendor impassioned so bright
refulgent waves from this lady in blue
Dazzling in beauty, dignity and grace
a simple gold charm adorns her smooth neck
highlights a dimpled and delicate face
eyes so enchant me, in sparkling affect
Soft scarlet lips with a wry little smile
yellow cloth pony tying her silk hair
I stand there in awe and gaze for awhile
as sweet scents of lilac float through the air
Strong my heart thumps for this lady in blue
Oh how I now realise dreams may come true
dragging me out of this comfort to view
delicate splendor impassioned so bright
refulgent waves from this lady in blue
Dazzling in beauty, dignity and grace
a simple gold charm adorns her smooth neck
highlights a dimpled and delicate face
eyes so enchant me, in sparkling affect
Soft scarlet lips with a wry little smile
yellow cloth pony tying her silk hair
I stand there in awe and gaze for awhile
as sweet scents of lilac float through the air
Strong my heart thumps for this lady in blue
Oh how I now realise dreams may come true
Published 27th Feb 2019
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Anonymous
27th Feb 2019 2:24pm
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27th Feb 2019 2:27pm
Thanks Sky, it was a difficult task. I'll stick to my normal style for a while now lol
Anonymous
27th Feb 2019 2:51pm
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27th Feb 2019 3:13pm
Oh this is one of your best so far ... timeless ... elegant feel ... great job with the rhyme ... bravo JT ...
27th Feb 2019 5:28pm
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- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
27th Feb 2019 9:56pm
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27th Feb 2019 10:02pm
Thanks but it's far from a perfect one. Lol
Still a few kinks but the subject matter and feeling do come thru. I'll revisit one day
Still a few kinks but the subject matter and feeling do come thru. I'll revisit one day
A love sonnet that gives me a lift. Dreams may indeed come true, even involving the lady in blue. The detail and descriptions here are marvelous.
1st Mar 2019 1:23am
