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SENRYU 11/2/18
We lay in our bodies
As downy feathers
On a pond
As downy feathers
On a pond
Published 27th Feb 2019
Author's Note
An old "draft" I finally decided to publish.
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
27th Feb 2019 5:32am
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No, and that is why we must experience them.
(it's funny - I originally categorized this as erotic. came back to it tonight and thought that was silly)
(it's funny - I originally categorized this as erotic. came back to it tonight and thought that was silly)
Have you seen
a jellyfish bounce
off the inside surface
of the water
like it's a ceiling?
a jellyfish bounce
off the inside surface
of the water
like it's a ceiling?
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
27th Feb 2019 5:46am
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27th Feb 2019 5:48am
Except that I saw nothing that would indicate frustration.
Then again, I don't know what a frustrated jellyfish looks like.
I'd imagine it looks like a content jellyfish,
But that's the problem with what lies underneath:
We can't imagine.
Then again, I don't know what a frustrated jellyfish looks like.
I'd imagine it looks like a content jellyfish,
But that's the problem with what lies underneath:
We can't imagine.
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
27th Feb 2019 6:24am
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27th Feb 2019 3:34pm
I don't think the "erotic" categorization would be silly at all. I read this with a sigh of contentment.
I'm adding "Frustrated Jellyfish" to my ever-lengthening list of awesome band names.
I'm adding "Frustrated Jellyfish" to my ever-lengthening list of awesome band names.
