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This Poetry Shit's Weighing Me Down
On those nights I can not sleep
I seek of ways to grow my craft
I'll sit in bed while eating sweets
but all, I fear, that's grown's my ass
Written by
Amorous_tryst
Published 26th Feb 2019
Author's Note
Entry for'the 'A Poet's Insomnia' comp
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Re. This Poetry Shit's Weighing Me Down
26th Feb 2019 9:59am
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26th Feb 2019 10:02am
Re. This Poetry Shit's Weighing Me Down
26th Feb 2019 10:16am
As my grandmother used to say: "The bigger the ass, the greater the art!"...:)
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27th Feb 2019 4:51pm
My mother used those words to describe my father (in good natured reference) at times: "thou art a big ass" :-)
Thanks for dropping by, truly is appreciated.
Thanks for dropping by, truly is appreciated.
Re. This Poetry Shit's Weighing Me Down
LOL I haven’t gone to bed yet, so I’m always fighting the urge to sneak snacks while I compose!
You got it in one, sister!
You got it in one, sister!
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Re: Re. This Poetry Shit's Weighing Me Down
27th Feb 2019 5:01pm
I do find myself snacking more when I'm writing, and sadly smoking more as well, I know, a nasty habit since my early teens, and I refrain while in company with those who do not smoke.
This was a non-serious entry on a whim, since I still had one available.
Thanks, Jade, and good luck in the comp as well.
This was a non-serious entry on a whim, since I still had one available.
Thanks, Jade, and good luck in the comp as well.
Re. This Poetry Shit's Weighing Me Down
26th Feb 2019 10:38am
Lmao... too damn funny n clever from start of title til end! Loved this! :)
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Re: Re. This Poetry Shit's Weighing Me Down
27th Feb 2019 8:13pm
The humor I find within life helps offset the horror I witness while living it.
Thank you, dear friend.
Thank you, dear friend.
Re. This Poetry Shit's Weighing Me Down
26th Feb 2019 11:48am
you!!! Teri!!
love your delivery! wit and wisdom's paste!
alchemist! gem!
love your delivery! wit and wisdom's paste!
alchemist! gem!
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Re: Re. This Poetry Shit's Weighing Me Down
27th Feb 2019 8:16pm
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26th Feb 2019 2:19pm
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27th Feb 2019 8:19pm
Re. This Poetry Shit's Weighing Me Down
26th Feb 2019 2:45pm
Re: Re. This Poetry Shit's Weighing Me Down
27th Feb 2019 8:23pm
Glad you found both within this 'lil spill, and agree that it can become a serious matter if left unchecked.
Appreciate the visit and comment.
Appreciate the visit and comment.
Re. This Poetry Shit's Weighing Me Down
26th Feb 2019 10:20pm
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27th Feb 2019 8:26pm
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27th Feb 2019 8:17am
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Re: Re. This Poetry Shit's Weighing Me Down
27th Feb 2019 8:57pm
So pleased to have brought you here with this. Went and watched the video to 'Hot In Herre'. Now I'm sittin', listenin', gots my feet tappin',
my mind rapin', and my ass twistin' Gonna hav ta get my dancin' shoes on, work off some of the fluff. :-)).
Thanks so much for enhancing my day.
Teri
my mind rapin', and my ass twistin' Gonna hav ta get my dancin' shoes on, work off some of the fluff. :-)).
Thanks so much for enhancing my day.
Teri
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1st Mar 2019 9:54am
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Re. This Poetry Shit's Weighing Me Down
27th Feb 2019 10:48pm
Lol I along with Missy's audio poem I didn't expect so much laughter signing in today. Kick ass
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Re: Re. This Poetry Shit's Weighing Me Down
28th Feb 2019 1:39am
Happy to have brought you a smile, Daniel, and yes, Miss_Sub's posting was quite witty and well delivered.
Thank you, my friend.
Thank you, my friend.
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28th Feb 2019 00:56am
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Re: Re. This Poetry Shit's Weighing Me Down
28th Feb 2019 1:58am
I've composed on the fly
even wrote on the run
but neither it seems
has kept check on my buns.
Not sure if it's the poetry or the pastries.
Thanks for stopping by and chirping in.
even wrote on the run
but neither it seems
has kept check on my buns.
Not sure if it's the poetry or the pastries.
Thanks for stopping by and chirping in.
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1st Apr 2019 9:23pm
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2nd Apr 2019 2:08am