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He can't shake the genuine interest;
- that excited look that came over her
or withdraw that feeling
of how her hand felt
as she assessed him
against the one
that struggled
to engage the donation
of her responsive mouth
 
"Wait!" he calls, hoping she hasn't gone
 
"I'm here," she responds  "Thought I'd give you a moment to reconsider"
 
He isn't about to let
such an offer slip through  
the possibility that another chance
might never occur
 
She steps inside the bathroom
 
He ensures it is completely closed,
and twists the knob into a locking position
 
"Let's not worry ourselves with being interrupted."
 
She has already liberated his cock back into her hand,
both hands gently working to keep him properly formed
 
"Kiss me," he says
 
And she collides with his lips,
quick kisses becoming more extended
as their awareness of the surroundings fade
 
She continues to massage him stiff
as he toys with her clit
through her panties
and slides a finger inside of her
down past the knuckle
and back out to her opening  
to linger before pushing in again
 
"Still want it in your mouth?"
 
She responds favourably to his manipulations
"...my pussy", she manages
 
"You think it's hard enough?"
 
She has led his tip to the cotton
rubbing it against herself
as he increases the rhythm
in and out of her
 
He feels the edge of her panties
against the side of his shaft
as she guides his bulb
and steadies it
 
"Push"she says "bury that cock in me"
 
Straight inside the pleasing heat
the call of her ache
grabbing his ass
to pull him deeper
their mouths on fire
genitals ablaze
 
"Fuck, yes"
peppered in the delirium
of their frantic fucking
 
"I knew it would feel good," she mutters
 
The party, the others
pleasantly forgotten
until the startling
knock at the door.
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