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A Submission
Her aggressive kiss
Swallowed me whole
The coldness of her lust
Burned my flesh
She whispers to my soul
Holding me down
Her skin feels all around me
It’s like she’s everywhere
Her breath becomes my breath
I’m desperate to surrender
To know the desires within her
Bending me to her
The agony of lost control
Under her body of fire
The pressure of ecstasy
Is like an erupting volcano
Pushing the molten lava to the surface
My complete surrender imminent
As the explosion is released
Swallowed me whole
The coldness of her lust
Burned my flesh
She whispers to my soul
Holding me down
Her skin feels all around me
It’s like she’s everywhere
Her breath becomes my breath
I’m desperate to surrender
To know the desires within her
Bending me to her
The agony of lost control
Under her body of fire
The pressure of ecstasy
Is like an erupting volcano
Pushing the molten lava to the surface
My complete surrender imminent
As the explosion is released
Published 24th Feb 2019
Author's Note
An attempt inspired by Sky_Dancers lastest poem The Strength Of Surrender
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25th Feb 2019 4:56am
I try to paint pictures without being too vulgar not saying anything against being straight to the point it’s just not the way I write. I may do in the future but for now I will stick to my metaphors
