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dawns a new day
I've been angry lately
I can't place the point of discontent
with a sigh...
I release it to the aether and connect
with the beautiful, dutiful, and kind
sisters and brothers of humanity
within the tranquil waters stirs
center my grief
transcending time immortally
unwinding in the atmosphere over peace
internally send out healing magic
once reserved for kings
I cry inside where no one can see
taste my tears on the wind
the flavor of the day is gentleness
I've done blind time
exiled in want
arise to a new dawn...
sisters and brothers of the host
evolving in depth of understanding
willing tradition be put aside allowing growth
as one takes a step forward
into the tomorrows over faith
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Re. dawns a new day
24th Feb 2019 2:24pm
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24th Feb 2019 2:24pm
Re. dawns a new day
24th Feb 2019 2:30pm
Very nicely expressed Crim..
Sounds like your Getting through on a more positive feel...
loves you sis❤️🌹
Jackie xo
Sounds like your Getting through on a more positive feel...
loves you sis❤️🌹
Jackie xo
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Re: Re. dawns a new day
thank you beautiful Jackie my mom helped me realize something today about my anger...gentleness is needed at times...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. dawns a new day
24th Feb 2019 3:09pm
Very much felt this Crim👏👏super relatable especially the beginning lines
"I've been angry lately
I can't place the point of discontent
with a sigh... "
I feel ya this is how I've been feeling this past week
"I cry inside where no one can see
taste my tears on the wind
the flavor of the day is gentleness"
This is so wonderfully written love this piece so much👏👏👏
"I've been angry lately
I can't place the point of discontent
with a sigh... "
I feel ya this is how I've been feeling this past week
"I cry inside where no one can see
taste my tears on the wind
the flavor of the day is gentleness"
This is so wonderfully written love this piece so much👏👏👏
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Re: Re. dawns a new day
24th Feb 2019 3:26pm
thank you graciously dearest Hunter for feeling me so deeply here...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. dawns a new day
24th Feb 2019 3:26pm
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24th Feb 2019 3:32pm
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Re: Re. dawns a new day
24th Feb 2019 3:41pm
giggles thank you graciously dearest poet... you know how we do... things aren't fair in the land of Nod...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. dawns a new day
24th Feb 2019 5:01pm
I've done blind time
exiled in want
arise to a new dawn...
Beautiful lines...great write
exiled in want
arise to a new dawn...
Beautiful lines...great write
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Re: Re. dawns a new day
24th Feb 2019 5:03pm
Re. dawns a new day
24th Feb 2019 5:40pm
Re: Re. dawns a new day
24th Feb 2019 7:04pm
thank you beautiful Pandora I'm sorry you know this kind of anger... I hope better days for us both...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. dawns a new day
24th Feb 2019 7:21pm
Re. dawns a new day
24th Feb 2019 8:12pm
It's especially beautiful to me when you poor from that vulnerability. It resonates. *hugs*
Daniel
Daniel
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Re: Re. dawns a new day
1st Mar 2019 11:38am
thank you graciously dearest Daniel for showing love for my softer side I wish she would always shine...
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. dawns a new day
25th Feb 2019 00:04am
This transcends the negative emotions, the anger and sorrow. "Arise to a new dawn" is one line that inspires, but it's just one of many. Love the entire poem and the positive vibe. Great work, Brenda!
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Re: Re. dawns a new day
1st Mar 2019 11:39am
Re. dawns a new day
25th Feb 2019 4:55am
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1st Mar 2019 11:40am
thank you beautiful Kitty I'm happy this lifted your spirits...
love & hugs...
Brenda
love & hugs...
Brenda
Re. dawns a new day
25th Feb 2019 8:57pm
So beautiful and healing Brenda.
"Anger is like picking up hot coals and throwing them, you always burn your own fingers first." The Buddha.
Cheers...Harry
"Anger is like picking up hot coals and throwing them, you always burn your own fingers first." The Buddha.
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. dawns a new day
1st Mar 2019 11:40am
thank you graciously dearest Harry for the wonderful quote you're so right...
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. dawns a new day
Anonymous
27th Feb 2019 2:08am
Brenda.. so fucking brilliant.. love you my sister..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. dawns a new day
1st Mar 2019 11:42am
dawns a new day
1st Mar 2019 2:51am
Hi, Crimsin
Long time no see!
But this piece brings me back to that new dawning in which your work stands proud after punching life deftly in the centre of its wake.
"I cry inside where no one can see" is such a beautiful picture of the true clockwork of many hearts! And yet, the redeeming spirit of
"as one takes a step forward
into the tomorrows over faith"
is a feature fitting to heal the whole.
Altogether lovely.
Long time no see!
But this piece brings me back to that new dawning in which your work stands proud after punching life deftly in the centre of its wake.
"I cry inside where no one can see" is such a beautiful picture of the true clockwork of many hearts! And yet, the redeeming spirit of
"as one takes a step forward
into the tomorrows over faith"
is a feature fitting to heal the whole.
Altogether lovely.
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Re: dawns a new day
1st Mar 2019 11:43am