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SUBCONSCIOUS POEM
"There is caffeine in chocolate"
The subconscious mind
Relayed to my conscious self
Because it needed a rationale
To stay awake
And my subconscious feared
The everyday death
That is sleep
The subconscious mind
Relayed to my conscious self
Because it needed a rationale
To stay awake
And my subconscious feared
The everyday death
That is sleep
Published 22nd Feb 2019
Author's Note
A poem for summultima's Insomnia comp
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22nd Feb 2019 7:02pm
Excellent lil piece Kumar!👏👏
Love that ending
"And my subconscious feared
The everyday death
That is sleep"
Wonderfully deep m8 i dig👏
Love that ending
"And my subconscious feared
The everyday death
That is sleep"
Wonderfully deep m8 i dig👏
22nd Feb 2019 7:08pm
23rd Feb 2019 7:49pm
23rd Feb 2019 7:53pm
When people begin to mess with consciousness, using hallucinogens or extreme experiences, it can be a vastly intimidating and inspiring experience. However, even people that never do any of that have to sleep, and in its own way it is an intimidating and inspiring experience.
