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whirlwind
Published 22nd Feb 2019
Author's Note
Copy/paste to view visual poem fullsize in full colour:
http://mydo.cx/ZjA3MDNk
I am experimenting with Concrete Poetry, which is the same as DU's in-forum Visual Poetry.
http://mydo.cx/ZjA3MDNk
I am experimenting with Concrete Poetry, which is the same as DU's in-forum Visual Poetry.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Anonymous
22nd Feb 2019 3:53am
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22nd Feb 2019 3:57am
22nd Feb 2019 5:52am
I'm not sure how to read this
but this is very pleasing to my eyes (and I have aged eyes and never have had a preference for the bright lights)
Awesome graphic, Brother
but this is very pleasing to my eyes (and I have aged eyes and never have had a preference for the bright lights)
Awesome graphic, Brother
22nd Feb 2019 5:59am
Thank you, Tallen. Here's the approach to reading the visual poem:
(a) Copy/paste this link into your browser:
http://mydo.cx/ZjA3MDNk
(b) Read along the colours, one band at a time.
Let me know the outcome when you have tried.
Bless you.
(a) Copy/paste this link into your browser:
http://mydo.cx/ZjA3MDNk
(b) Read along the colours, one band at a time.
Let me know the outcome when you have tried.
Bless you.
22nd Feb 2019 6:03am
22nd Feb 2019 3:06pm
