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Your Love (And I'm in Love!)
Oooooo. . .
What can I do
When You're the one who's got control?
Oooooo. . .
It's a brand new day
And I love what You're doin' to my soul!
And I'm in love!
Love!
And I'm not afraid to say it.
Love! Love!
Singin' and a playin'
I can step out in love 'cause I know ----
You'll never let me go!
If I am sad and feelin' so blue
I think of who loves me----eeeee.
And vision of memory starts to come through
And You're beauty sets me free----eeeee.
Oooooo. . .
What can I do
When You're the one who's got control?
Oooooo. . .
It's a brand new day
And I love what You're doin' to my soul!
And I'm in love!
Love!
And I'm not afraid to say it.
Love! Love!
Singin' and a playin'
I can step out in love 'cause I know ----
You'll never let me go!
When I am glad and feelin' so high
And a part of the cause is You----ooooo.
Your love makes me happy----I don't know why
All I know is that Your love is true----ooooo.
Oooooo. . .
What can I do
When You're the one who's got control?
Oooooo. . .
It's a brand new day
And I love what You're doin' to my soul!
And I'm in love!
Love!
And I'm not afraid to say it.
Love! Love!
Singin' and a playin'
I can step out in love 'cause I know ----
You'll never let me go!
I'm truly in love and proud to say
that You're my only one-----(on)
I'm----Yours forever, if You want me to stay
(yet) still in love,
If You want me gone----(on)
Oooooo. . .
What can I do
When You're the one who's got control?
Oooooo. . .
It's a brand new day
And I love what You're doin' to my soul!
And I'm in love!
Love!
And I'm not afraid to say it.
Love! Love!
Singin' and a playin'
I can step out in love 'cause I know ----
You'll never let me go!
Published 21st Feb 2019
| Edited 5th May 2019
Author's Note
Em
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21st Feb 2019 9:49pm
Beautiful and so true ... we hand the keys to our hearts and souls at some point to the deepest loved ... trusting ... such a wonderful honest right ... Bess and love Dear Tallen ...
21st Feb 2019 9:50pm
So true --
evidently, I've made too many duplicate keys.
thank You for the read and
wise comments
evidently, I've made too many duplicate keys.
thank You for the read and
wise comments
21st Feb 2019 9:58pm
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21st Feb 2019 10:18pm
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21st Feb 2019 10:20pm
appreciate the read and feel
there is a tune in my mind's ear but I'm not able to put this into notes as I suck at music composing.
If I had one of my friends who writes music nearby we could and would.
there is a tune in my mind's ear but I'm not able to put this into notes as I suck at music composing.
If I had one of my friends who writes music nearby we could and would.
Anonymous
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21st Feb 2019 10:25pm
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21st Feb 2019 10:29pm
Anonymous
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21st Feb 2019 10:31pm
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Anonymous
21st Feb 2019 11:20pm
Infectious happiness right there. And the world needs more of that. This would make an excellent song with a few tweaks.
Thanks for sharing, and I’ll have one of whatever you’ve swallowed. 👌🏻
-M
Thanks for sharing, and I’ll have one of whatever you’ve swallowed. 👌🏻
-M
21st Feb 2019 11:40pm
21st Feb 2019 11:48pm
you've made me giggle, suddenly I feel feather light
too cute, tallen and I'm glad to see you're movement
of happiness
too cute, tallen and I'm glad to see you're movement
of happiness
22nd Feb 2019 00:02am
22nd Feb 2019 1:52am
Very nice write Tallen! I read this as a wonderful song in my mind👏👏 flows so smoothly and just feels like it should be sung
Loved this👏👏
Loved this👏👏
22nd Feb 2019 2:26am
I spilled it as a song
and have a tune in mind just not able to put it to paper and too shy to put on my You Tube account for all the world to hear.
appreciate Your read, though -
thank You
and have a tune in mind just not able to put it to paper and too shy to put on my You Tube account for all the world to hear.
appreciate Your read, though -
thank You
Anonymous
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22nd Feb 2019 10:26am
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22nd Feb 2019 4:38pm
It's amazing what one can spill after sleeping more than 3 hrs a night!
appreciate the read and wonderful praise
appreciate the read and wonderful praise
22nd Feb 2019 10:32am
Feeling this spill Tallen;
Great upbeat vibes in this write. Set me up for the weekend. :)
Great upbeat vibes in this write. Set me up for the weekend. :)
22nd Feb 2019 4:40pm
22nd Feb 2019 3:09pm
22nd Feb 2019 4:41pm
appreciate Your stopping by to read and share Your wonderful read with me
thank You
thank You
