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Visions
Dark visions , light heart
which one will sing for me tonight
love my dear,
how you get away from me
no more, no more
a speculum regale
as I wander in those eyes
silk with satin swirls
life's true meaning curls
and cues to the melody
dancing in its every beat
surrendered is the night
with visions of only light
which one will sing for me tonight
love my dear,
how you get away from me
no more, no more
a speculum regale
as I wander in those eyes
silk with satin swirls
life's true meaning curls
and cues to the melody
dancing in its every beat
surrendered is the night
with visions of only light
Published 19th Feb 2019
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19th Feb 2019 1:42pm
I love your heart dearest Tim
be it by the brightest light
or the bleakest night...
love Brenda ❤
be it by the brightest light
or the bleakest night...
love Brenda ❤
19th Feb 2019 1:54pm
19th Feb 2019 1:55pm
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- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
19th Feb 2019 4:32pm
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19th Feb 2019 4:41pm
19th Feb 2019 7:48pm
19th Feb 2019 7:50pm
19th Feb 2019 10:37pm
The "light heart" prevails despite your darker side. My favorite lines:
silk with satin swirls
life's true meaning curls
and cues to the melody
dancing in its every beat
That eloquence brings the visions to life, as does the rest of this write. Excellent job!
silk with satin swirls
life's true meaning curls
and cues to the melody
dancing in its every beat
That eloquence brings the visions to life, as does the rest of this write. Excellent job!
19th Feb 2019 10:43pm
