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Vaelvi~ Worship
arisen
from subterranean
apoplectic dungeons
plethora of feckless spectre
pummels her fimbriate
palpebrae
embattling warrior
absolves her quadrupled
rudra horns of templed
logjam, her
transcendental
essence overlaps Him
in a dialoguing silence
fo(u)r eyes stare wide
in seamless
fusion
Published 18th Feb 2019
Author's Note
Title 'vaelvi' is wordy transliteration for ‘வேள்வி’ (in Tamil)
a non-entry for "A Poet's Insomnia: Micropoetry Comp" (40 word limit inclusive of title)
a non-entry for "A Poet's Insomnia: Micropoetry Comp" (40 word limit inclusive of title)
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18th Feb 2019 10:50am
I felt the strong resolve in this, my friend! As though you had risen and stood face-to-face with whatever had you down.
Well done!
Well done!
18th Feb 2019 2:58pm
Absolutely stunning spill uma! So love your masterful word weaving 👏
Love the ending especially
"fo(u)r eyes stare wide
in seamless
fusion"
Superb penning👏
Love the ending especially
"fo(u)r eyes stare wide
in seamless
fusion"
Superb penning👏
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
18th Feb 2019 4:59pm
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