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fake God
once her blazing sun
he, when the eclipse arrived
lost his corona
he, when the eclipse arrived
lost his corona
Published 16th Feb 2019
Author's Note
Testing times reveal the truth.
corona:
the rarefied gaseous envelope of the sun and other stars. The sun's corona is normally visible only during a total solar eclipse, when it is seen as an irregularly shaped pearly glow surrounding the darkened disc of the moon.
corona:
the rarefied gaseous envelope of the sun and other stars. The sun's corona is normally visible only during a total solar eclipse, when it is seen as an irregularly shaped pearly glow surrounding the darkened disc of the moon.
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Anonymous
16th Feb 2019 8:24pm
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17th Feb 2019 4:06pm
Welcome is the peer admired!
welcome is the review, kind.
appreciate both. immensely
welcome is the review, kind.
appreciate both. immensely
16th Feb 2019 8:30pm
Hi Fuze... Love this...marvelous allusion, to the truth becoming apparent...given time...and enough rope...Ely
17th Feb 2019 4:31pm
Welcome Dear Sis!
thank You for the honor! humbled. truly humbled i am.
for such an admired poet to say that.
And your vision and insight are beyond remarkable!
Yes, truth, in time always reveals itself.
regards
thank You for the honor! humbled. truly humbled i am.
for such an admired poet to say that.
And your vision and insight are beyond remarkable!
Yes, truth, in time always reveals itself.
regards
Careful Fuze, such praise is likely to go to my head... for this piece well deserves the good words... as do you.
Like...I mean... is there a poem without a poet? Or a poet's appreciation. Ely
Like...I mean... is there a poem without a poet? Or a poet's appreciation. Ely
17th Feb 2019 4:46pm
i will dare not but say the truth, the way my heart feels coz as the scribble says- truth will reveal itself... fresh in mind from just above :-)) i'd rather not express if i don't feel what's right ;-) so you better keep the doses of humilty to self at low range Ely!
I keep the honors close to heart! (deserved or not that's another matter ;-) )
I keep the honors close to heart! (deserved or not that's another matter ;-) )
Anonymous
17th Feb 2019 9:16am
cosmically told holds the truth in unerasable grandeur..the elevated spiritual dimensions ...
& aren't we but drops of cosmos in ourselves..that such lang flows at versified ease as yours..
this is piercing truth in depiction, in the shatters of this brokenness-this her heartmindsoul
what is told.. is intense immense in the brevity,
eclipsing darkness choking from the revelation,
from the faith crumbling to dusts sudden ..
#juzme from ur art.
write on cold one x
& aren't we but drops of cosmos in ourselves..that such lang flows at versified ease as yours..
this is piercing truth in depiction, in the shatters of this brokenness-this her heartmindsoul
what is told.. is intense immense in the brevity,
eclipsing darkness choking from the revelation,
from the faith crumbling to dusts sudden ..
#juzme from ur art.
write on cold one x
17th Feb 2019 4:36pm
Goodnes Gracious!!!
humbled beyond words dear Artist! for the
honor and depth of your insight and kindness in your review of this scribble.
poem intense- is how i find your generous feedback dear Friend! beyond words- my appreciation for all
humbled beyond words dear Artist! for the
honor and depth of your insight and kindness in your review of this scribble.
poem intense- is how i find your generous feedback dear Friend! beyond words- my appreciation for all
17th Feb 2019 12:13pm
17th Feb 2019 4:39pm
humbled. beyond words.
and fell silent...
thank You Ms Noire! for the honor- beyond words!
and fell silent...
thank You Ms Noire! for the honor- beyond words!
17th Feb 2019 2:27pm
Trials & tribulations do have a way of bringing things into the light of day.
Love the truth and brevity which shine in your thoughts, my brother.
Love the truth and brevity which shine in your thoughts, my brother.
17th Feb 2019 2:29pm
welcome! is the Wise Friend!
Welcome is the Wisdom.
treasured is your company Sis! as is your wisdom and affection.
honored. beyond words.
Welcome is the Wisdom.
treasured is your company Sis! as is your wisdom and affection.
honored. beyond words.
17th Feb 2019 4:35pm
17th Feb 2019 4:42pm
17th Feb 2019 9:33pm
When doing my morning sitting...I sometimes stumble on the truth...that sudden realization that their is absolutely nothing that I ever do without some assistance. A deeply beautiful poem my friend.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
23rd Feb 2019 11:08am
