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beneath the blueberry heavens
inside the eternal ache
I'm nude before you
so vulnerable to your touch
please come gently and tenderly
my soul fully undressed
is sensitive to your touch
stand watch over me
let no marauder near
in my weakened state
I would be defenseless
responding to your voice alone
I come into your love shine
a delicate bud blooming desire
sweet nectar of the gods
a warrior has come forth
beat down the suppressors
and lay claim to me
I am secure in your arms
my internal waters are clean now
come unto me and be renewed
teach me in the ways of love
the art of a really loving a man wholly
inside you, a God of remembrance
who stirs my passions
so much like a woman
but before you a trembling girl
a waterfall of emotions...cascade within me
stand with me as they wash over us both
ushering in a day of tenderness
renewal of trust...you defeated the dark
in you, I am brand new...love
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14th Feb 2019 2:14pm
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14th Feb 2019 2:16pm
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14th Feb 2019 2:28pm
You deserve nothing other than these written words. Your demons & pain shine no brighter than your beauty. Its time they be put to rest. Remember that sweets.. always. Big hugs💕
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14th Feb 2019 2:30pm
thank you beautiful Pandora for such a loving comment...you really touched my heart...
love & hugs...
Brenda 💕
love & hugs...
Brenda 💕
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14th Feb 2019 2:47pm
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14th Feb 2019 2:52pm
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14th Feb 2019 2:51pm
thank you graciously dearest Snugglebuck... I'm so happy you felt this... Happy Valentine's Day...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
beneath the blueberry heavens
14th Feb 2019 3:32pm
A fitting tribute to the celebration of true love and a most delectable feast for a day such as this -- Valentine's.
The persona's admissible vulnerability
"so much like a woman
but before you a trembling girl"
finds firm assurance in the chivalrous rescue of her knight
"a warrior has come forth
beat down the suppressors
and lay claim to me
I am secure in your arms"
Bravo.
The persona's admissible vulnerability
"so much like a woman
but before you a trembling girl"
finds firm assurance in the chivalrous rescue of her knight
"a warrior has come forth
beat down the suppressors
and lay claim to me
I am secure in your arms"
Bravo.
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14th Feb 2019 3:34pm
thank you graciously dearest Cabcool for such a beautiful comment... bringing me smiles... Happy Valentine's Day dear poet...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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14th Feb 2019 3:58pm
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14th Feb 2019 4:51pm
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14th Feb 2019 6:23pm
thank you graciously beautiful Mysteria... Happy Valentine's Day...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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15th Feb 2019 00:33am
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15th Feb 2019 00:42am
Happy Valentine's Day, Brenda. Again you win my heart. Love that title, and every line. My favorites:
inside you, a God of remembrance
who stirs my passions
so much like a woman
but before you a trembling girl
But that was a hard choice. Wonderful work all the way!
inside you, a God of remembrance
who stirs my passions
so much like a woman
but before you a trembling girl
But that was a hard choice. Wonderful work all the way!
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15th Feb 2019 2:12pm
thank you graciously dearest Thomas for the love on this write...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. beneath the blueberry heavens
18th Feb 2019 5:56am
I'm catching up with you girlie..the lil mad writer. Another heart tugger. Sigh. Love sent your way💜
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18th Feb 2019 5:58am