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Rays

Absorb this sunlight
transforming my stubborn pride
hopeful reflections
Tenderloin
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Re. Rays
9th Feb 2019 7:20pm
nice haiku - well formed
SweetOblivion
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Re. Rays
9th Feb 2019 7:30pm
It takes a lot of invested thought put into a haiku for me to embrace it. So you get a high five from me. Knowing the meaning behind It, I see your strength. May those rays heal You, my friend.🌞
PandoraUnleashed
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Re: Re. Rays
9th Feb 2019 8:41pm
All is not lost.
Tenderloin

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