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Hail Mary
I have a deep faith
with broken dreams...I awake
shattered prayers
hollow hallelujahs...
only reached your cock
you stole my innocence
while I lay me down to sleep
thief of soul...
for this I should pray?
salvation will never be mine
I hung from your cross of lust
crucified where it hurt
for all women I bleed...
selah...
Published 9th Feb 2019
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Anonymous
9th Feb 2019 2:59pm
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9th Feb 2019 3:03pm
thank you beautiful Sky for your comment this is about soul rape, a raping of faith...it's probably my fault it's too vague...
I deeply appreciate the love on this write...
love Brenda ❤
I deeply appreciate the love on this write...
love Brenda ❤
Anonymous
9th Feb 2019 3:18pm
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9th Feb 2019 3:20pm
I really enjoy your interpretation and that's poetry... your thoughts are beautiful as are you...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
9th Feb 2019 3:22pm
I disagree Crim, it was quite clear and heart breaking. How early sily people forget the frailty of the soul, regardless of its fortitude, still requires great care.
This was beautifully written.
This was beautifully written.
9th Feb 2019 3:29pm
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
9th Feb 2019 3:11pm
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9th Feb 2019 3:13pm
thank you dearest poet for feeling me so deeply... your thoughts are greatly appreciated...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
9th Feb 2019 7:46pm
I feel you deeply on this one. Sigh.🖤 Your words are your treasure & blessing, crimson. The way you portray this or anything soul deep is otherworldly!!
9th Feb 2019 7:57pm
9th Feb 2019 11:18pm
Though there is an element of pain and violation it is almost as if virgin we are all doomed to fail this blessed moment to hopefully learn from it ... Beautifully said ... Bless and love ...
11th Feb 2019 3:55pm
thank you dearest Fenyx for your deeper understanding of this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
10th Feb 2019 00:55am
Poignant and wonderfully written work, Brenda. Hallelujah for a woman of your talent!
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