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A successful journey
To succeed your journey
you must learn to pace
your route
of destiny
To see the damage you've done
you must suffer
to open
and learn
to ensure you're never in the wrong again
you must do it
and decide
on your actions
to make people love you more
you must make them cry
and feast
on tears
to realise what you want
you must think about what you need
or what
you already have
to realise when death wants you
you must understand the dream
and never
fear it
you must learn to pace
your route
of destiny
To see the damage you've done
you must suffer
to open
and learn
to ensure you're never in the wrong again
you must do it
and decide
on your actions
to make people love you more
you must make them cry
and feast
on tears
to realise what you want
you must think about what you need
or what
you already have
to realise when death wants you
you must understand the dream
and never
fear it
Published 18th Nov 2011
| Edited 1st Sep 2012
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19th Nov 2011 2:15pm
Wicken:) your right one can not exsist with out the other. To feel love, you have to know what hate is. To know what you have you have to know loss. You seen my tattoo. No heaven no hell, it will always be in check. Great write dark mistress!
Anonymous
27th Aug 2012 7:49pm
Thank you for sharing your work. On this line "to ensure you never in the wrong again " should "you" be "you are" Thank you again.
